Comment from meeshu

Excellent

we really can't make sense out of senseless violence. it worse in this country, when happens the first thing is: whose side gets to be outraged. great write bringing this our, Jen....................meeshu

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 21-Feb-2019

Thanks Meeshu. Jen. X

Comment from HealingMuse

Excellent

Hi Jenin,

Excellent poem and contest entry. Very well written. Best of luck in the voting booth.

Nothing to suggest improving upon here.

Thank you for sharing your work.

Jan

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 21-Feb-2019

Thank you

Comment from seaglass

Excellent

There is so much killing going on in the world these days and not even from war. Stabbings are horrible but here in America so many are done with guns. And they're big assault rifles. Everyday we wake up to a new one that has killed many. I'm so very very angry that we have to live in this fear.

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 21-Feb-2019

Many thanks for your comments. Jen.

Comment from Louise Michelle

Excellent

Hah! I understand your sentiments. Civilized people are not barbaric. But, then, there are an awful lot of uncivilized people roaming this planet. Good presentation- grabbed my attention and your words held it. Best Wishes, Lou

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019

Thanks a lot for the great review. Jen

Comment from Gail Denham

Excellent

Not people? Then who? Or perhaps you mean they've lost their right to be called people. Probably true. There are some cities I wouldn't care to wander around. London is one. Paris another. And Chicago for sure. We traveled around England, Wales, and a bit in France - but chose all the small towns we could find. My friend was researching historic fiction on WWII - fascinating. And I took pictures. Loved Wales.
Anger yes. I agree. Good job.

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019

Many thanks.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written Cinquain poem about the chaos in the world that people are killed for no reason at all in the most horrible ways. It is really a bad situation we are in.

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019

Thanks Sandra.

Comment from Miss Sherry

Excellent

I can understand your rage - I feel it too when such things happen in my much smaller city. You have expressed yourself well. Your artwork is a montage of anger and frustration, just perfect for the verse. People? Savages? Some unthinkable mutation made by the circumstances of this world? Very nicely done and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019

Thanks for your great review. Jen.

Comment from LisaMay

Excellent

This is so topical. I hate reading the paper... more and more violence because of crazy people or extremists. I am so glad i live in relatively peaceful NZ, although there is too much violence here also.

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019

Thanks for your great review. Jen

Comment from Janice Canerdy

Excellent

Your cinquain describes the type of people--and evil--running rampant
over a large portion of Earth. So much of the news is about murder,
rape, . . . I'm from the US--same here!

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019

Many thanks. Jen

Comment from country ranch writer

Excellent

This world has gone out of control and kill to become a killer and for no rhyme or reason some just want to be noticed others have just lost it for one reason or another

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019

Many thanks. Jen