"Amazing!" #1. 2019
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "When God Makes You Cry?"New Book of Poetry.
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Comment from Earl Corp
This quite possibly my favorite poem of yours that I have read on Fanstory. It was so upbeat and positive, I loved it. A couple of errors: Shouldn't yo be to? Shouldn't , feel into the pit be fell?? Very nice job.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2019
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This quite possibly my favorite poem of yours that I have read on Fanstory. It was so upbeat and positive, I loved it. A couple of errors: Shouldn't yo be to? Shouldn't , feel into the pit be fell?? Very nice job.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2019
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Cleaned it up Earl.
It's much better.
Thanks, Ricky
Comment from Stephanie Launiu
What an adorable baby picture to go with your poem. I love the line "When God makes you cry" because it's so heartfelt, and we each have had days when we thought we wanted to just curl up and die. But you have suffered tragedy and made life better for others. There are a few minor typos, but nothing you won't catch in a final edit. Your poem speaks the truth of pain to many readers. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2019
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What an adorable baby picture to go with your poem. I love the line "When God makes you cry" because it's so heartfelt, and we each have had days when we thought we wanted to just curl up and die. But you have suffered tragedy and made life better for others. There are a few minor typos, but nothing you won't catch in a final edit. Your poem speaks the truth of pain to many readers. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2019
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Thanks Stephanie.
Doctor Ricky
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