Comment from Miss Sherry

Excellent

This is so pretty! The photo is gorgeous and blends with your words.
"Fingers
of feathered light"
This line is not only brilliant alliteration, but paint a picture in the reader's mind.
Just a wonderful gem you have given us!

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019

Thank you very much, Sherry!! I really appreciate your review and encouraging comments.

Melissa

Comment from June Sargent

Excellent

Very clever! The shape of the poem mirrors the image in the artwork. The mountains peak just like the words of the poem. And the description is perfect. Peach shaded fingers caressing the mountains. Lovely!

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 Comment Written 18-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019

I loved your review, June. i am glad you caught the subtleties of this piece.... believe it or not, the poem came first... thanks a bunch!!

Melissa

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Exceptional

This poem has a perfect flow which is difficult to achieve with this form, your subject matter has been brought to life with your eloquent words and I enjoyed this very much Melissa, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019

Thanks so much, Dolly. I really appreciate your wonderful review! It?s fun and a challenge to find those descriptive words.. Much appreciated.

Melissa