Unicorn Dreams
Dreams do come true.17 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written story about dreams that may come true when we truly believe it will, maybe not in the way we were thinking, but it will happen when it is meant to happen.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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A very well-written story about dreams that may come true when we truly believe it will, maybe not in the way we were thinking, but it will happen when it is meant to happen.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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Thanks so much for reading, Sandra.
Comment from zanya
Simply captivating -dreams do indeed come true if perhaps we will only allow them- the tone is wistful and endearing drawing the reader in gently to see what happens next - loved it !!
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Simply captivating -dreams do indeed come true if perhaps we will only allow them- the tone is wistful and endearing drawing the reader in gently to see what happens next - loved it !!
Comment Written 17-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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Thanks for your kind review and generous rating. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from damommy
Did her father notice she had become a unicorn? I'm glad she became one since she wanted to for so long. Maybe now, we'll have a few little baby unicorns. A delightful story.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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Did her father notice she had become a unicorn? I'm glad she became one since she wanted to for so long. Maybe now, we'll have a few little baby unicorns. A delightful story.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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Oh yes he did!
Thanks for reading.
Comment from 24chas
This was a great read, Maria Jose Garcia. It was so pleasant to read and I loved the story itself. You should get this illustrated and published. Nice job.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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This was a great read, Maria Jose Garcia. It was so pleasant to read and I loved the story itself. You should get this illustrated and published. Nice job.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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Thanks so much for this very kind review. And for the golden star, of course.
Comment from Debra White
Hello Maria,
I have just read this story to my 8yr old daughter, Rebecca before she went to bed. She has awarded you a big shiny 6 stars ð???
Congratulations!!
Best wishes, Debra (& Rebecca!)
Ps: I enjoyed the story too!
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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Hello Maria,
I have just read this story to my 8yr old daughter, Rebecca before she went to bed. She has awarded you a big shiny 6 stars ð???
Congratulations!!
Best wishes, Debra (& Rebecca!)
Ps: I enjoyed the story too!
Comment Written 17-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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Tell Rebecca I'm really, really happy she liked my story. And tell her I say thank you for the stars.
Thanks for this lovely review. It made my day.
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You?re very welcome :)
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, Maria, this is just a magical little tale that is just a wonderful write for children! ;) :) I do hope you have an illustrator in your back packet so that some little ones can enjoy it as a 'graphic novel' :) :) ;) Thank you for sharing! :)
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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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Oh, Maria, this is just a magical little tale that is just a wonderful write for children! ;) :) I do hope you have an illustrator in your back packet so that some little ones can enjoy it as a 'graphic novel' :) :) ;) Thank you for sharing! :)
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Comment Written 17-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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I'm glad you liked my little story. I love writing for children, but I can't draw to save my life and I have no illustrator. Maybe one day...
Thanks for reading.
Comment from royowen
What a happy little story Maria. We should all be victims of our dreams, without a dream we would all be the victims of life. What a delightful story, on always rejoices in a happy ending, and this would be a lovely story fo a little one, well dine Maria, blessjngs, Roy
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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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What a happy little story Maria. We should all be victims of our dreams, without a dream we would all be the victims of life. What a delightful story, on always rejoices in a happy ending, and this would be a lovely story fo a little one, well dine Maria, blessjngs, Roy
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Comment Written 17-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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Thanks for reading, Roy. And for your constant support.
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Most welcome Maria
