Unicorn Dreams
Dreams do come true.17 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
I loved this fantasy story of love, and in the end her dreams did come true.
her voice shaking like a baby leaf in a winter storm. - great line Maria and I really enjoyed the read.
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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I loved this fantasy story of love, and in the end her dreams did come true.
her voice shaking like a baby leaf in a winter storm. - great line Maria and I really enjoyed the read.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 25-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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Thanks for reading, Valda. Have a nice day.
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi, Maria,
Such a lovely story! My granddaughter would love this. I've been telling her unicorns are real, but they only appear to very special and loving people. Above all, I warn, you must believe.
Your story seems to confirm just that.
Thank you for sharing,
~patty~
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2019
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Hi, Maria,
Such a lovely story! My granddaughter would love this. I've been telling her unicorns are real, but they only appear to very special and loving people. Above all, I warn, you must believe.
Your story seems to confirm just that.
Thank you for sharing,
~patty~
Comment Written 21-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2019
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Thanks so much for reading. Take care.
Comment from Ulla
Aweeeee, Maria Jose, isn't this just too sweet. I love it. What a lovely fairy tale. All her dreams did indeed come true. I wish I had a six for this lovely tale. It is so very well written. All best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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Aweeeee, Maria Jose, isn't this just too sweet. I love it. What a lovely fairy tale. All her dreams did indeed come true. I wish I had a six for this lovely tale. It is so very well written. All best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 19-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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Thanks so much for reading. Have a lovely day, Ulla.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written and very cute short story about the little horse wanting to be a unicorn and them running into one, You used very cute, descriptive words and the art work went well with your words. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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This is a very well written and very cute short story about the little horse wanting to be a unicorn and them running into one, You used very cute, descriptive words and the art work went well with your words. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 19-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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Thanks so much for reading. Take care.
Comment from robyn corum
MJ,
Cool. Dreams do come true, don't they? Though, not always dreams like this. But I'm happy this story ended this way. It's a cute one. *smile*
Just a couple of tiny notes:
1.) 'I (have) never seen you before,' the unicorn told Sugar.
2.) It simply said,(space)'(no space)Dreams do come true.'
Thanks!
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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MJ,
Cool. Dreams do come true, don't they? Though, not always dreams like this. But I'm happy this story ended this way. It's a cute one. *smile*
Just a couple of tiny notes:
1.) 'I (have) never seen you before,' the unicorn told Sugar.
2.) It simply said,(space)'(no space)Dreams do come true.'
Thanks!
Comment Written 18-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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Thanks for reading and for the corrections.
Comment from Stephanie Launiu
Loved your story of Sugar. The artwork is adorable too, and fits in perfectly with Sugar loving to read and dream. Sugar, the horse who dreamed of being a unicorn, is a story any magic-loving child or adult will love.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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Loved your story of Sugar. The artwork is adorable too, and fits in perfectly with Sugar loving to read and dream. Sugar, the horse who dreamed of being a unicorn, is a story any magic-loving child or adult will love.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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I'm glad you liked the story. Thanks for reading.
Comment from Sugarray77
What a charming and lovely story, Maria.. I truly love the happy ending and the moral of ... Dreams do Come True... Your plot, sequencing of events, and character development was really good for this short tale. Well done.
Melissa
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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What a charming and lovely story, Maria.. I truly love the happy ending and the moral of ... Dreams do Come True... Your plot, sequencing of events, and character development was really good for this short tale. Well done.
Melissa
Comment Written 17-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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Thanks for reading, Melissa. Have a lovely day.
Comment from pbomar1115
I enjoyed this fairy tale like (I guess you can call it) story. It's innocents designed to seize the mind of children and grown people minds like mine. The child grew in a way, learning that she can hope while others remain as they are. Great story, Maria.
Phillip
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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I enjoyed this fairy tale like (I guess you can call it) story. It's innocents designed to seize the mind of children and grown people minds like mine. The child grew in a way, learning that she can hope while others remain as they are. Great story, Maria.
Phillip
Comment Written 17-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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Thanks for your review and generous rating, Phillip.
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You're welcome, Maria. The writing is good because you consistently crank out story after story.
Phillip
Comment from Louise Michelle
This was delightful, Maria. Everyone needs a little magic in their lives, both young and old.
But that's not to take away from your strong message regarding Sugar and her ability to have strong belief in herself and in the possibilities of life. Well done! Best Wishes, Lou
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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This was delightful, Maria. Everyone needs a little magic in their lives, both young and old.
But that's not to take away from your strong message regarding Sugar and her ability to have strong belief in herself and in the possibilities of life. Well done! Best Wishes, Lou
Comment Written 17-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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Thanks sp much for reading, Lou.
Comment from aryr
A very enjoyable story Maria. I liked the note she wrote to Mrs. Hay that 'dreams do come true'. This was a perfect ending to the story, it was a good morale, it was great to read because of the flow of interest. Very well done.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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A very enjoyable story Maria. I liked the note she wrote to Mrs. Hay that 'dreams do come true'. This was a perfect ending to the story, it was a good morale, it was great to read because of the flow of interest. Very well done.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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Thanks for your review, Aryr.
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Most welcome Maria
