5-7-5 children's imagination
imagining the future15 total reviews
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Mark!
What a cheerful and well-crafted 5/7/5 poetic offering! And I love the reference to "A Wrinkle in Time!" with a "twinkle in time!" Smiles all around!
Thank you for sharing!
diane
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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Hello Mark!
What a cheerful and well-crafted 5/7/5 poetic offering! And I love the reference to "A Wrinkle in Time!" with a "twinkle in time!" Smiles all around!
Thank you for sharing!
diane
Comment Written 25-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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Diane,
Pleased that my effort put a cheerful twinkle in your eye. Your stars and comments are just a few additional sparkles for me.
Mark
Comment from patcelaw
There is a need in the world today that we as adults would encourage the children to imagine. Where would we be with the minds like that of Thomas A Edison and his ability to imagine. Patricia
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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There is a need in the world today that we as adults would encourage the children to imagine. Where would we be with the minds like that of Thomas A Edison and his ability to imagine. Patricia
Comment Written 25-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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Patricia,
THANKS AGAIN for your review of my short verse efforts.
Mark
Comment from gsuarez
The words chosen for this piece ring so true. I thought it was a wonderful reflection of the passing of time, not only from a child's perspective but and adults as well. The picture was perfectly chosen.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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The words chosen for this piece ring so true. I thought it was a wonderful reflection of the passing of time, not only from a child's perspective but and adults as well. The picture was perfectly chosen.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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THANK YOU gsuarez!
Glad the whole package pleased you in different ways.
Mark
Comment from Jennifer Carr
This 5-7-5 is so sweet. I think you did a great job Mark - I like the Twinkle in time in association with the children's imagination. This is really good
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reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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This 5-7-5 is so sweet. I think you did a great job Mark - I like the Twinkle in time in association with the children's imagination. This is really good
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Comment Written 25-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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Jennifer,
Your comments are greatly appreciated. Pleased it placed good twinkle in your eye.
Mark
Comment from Sugarray77
Mark, I love your lighthearted and innocent approach to this little 5-7-5. Your use of artwork instead of photography added to the childlike nature and the word "twinkle" really caps it as imaginative and fantastical. Well done.
Melissa
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reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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Mark, I love your lighthearted and innocent approach to this little 5-7-5. Your use of artwork instead of photography added to the childlike nature and the word "twinkle" really caps it as imaginative and fantastical. Well done.
Melissa
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Comment Written 25-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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Thanks Melissa for your frequent reviews and generous comments.
Mark
