5-7-5 children's imagination
imagining the future15 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about children's imagination that is very innocent and can mean a lot to them. Alice in Wonderland was my first owned story book I could read myself and it is still my most precious treasure.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about children's imagination that is very innocent and can mean a lot to them. Alice in Wonderland was my first owned story book I could read myself and it is still my most precious treasure.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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Sandra,
Thank you for your review and comments. I wish that I could remember which was my first cherished book. Pleased that Alice has a special place in your heart.
Mark
Comment from Miss Sherry
Delightful artwork that enhances your verse well. Children do have minds that soar beyond what we as adults achieve. I love haiku and the 5-7-5 form in general. It is amazing what 17 syllables can say. Nice job with this.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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Delightful artwork that enhances your verse well. Children do have minds that soar beyond what we as adults achieve. I love haiku and the 5-7-5 form in general. It is amazing what 17 syllables can say. Nice job with this.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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THANK YOU Miss Sherry for your kind remarks about my imagination. If you are interested in info about Haiku, please visit theHaikuFoundation.org website. One can post here ONLY if their moderator accepts your verse. But, there is no funny money earned for reviews or entry fees. I have had a few of my Haiku 5-7-5s posted there. You will find that many of their Haiku does not strictly adhere to my three-lined, 575 format.
Mark
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Thank you so much for that info. I really love traditional haiku, but 5-7-5 allows more freedom.
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True 575 is an easier do, but that Haiku ?aha moment? (satori) may be worth our effort!
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You are very right - that is worth it all!
Comment from Louise Michelle
What a lovely presentation. The image is wonderful and your words compliment it nicely. If we can imagine it, it can come to be. Regards, Lou
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2019
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What a lovely presentation. The image is wonderful and your words compliment it nicely. If we can imagine it, it can come to be. Regards, Lou
Comment Written 27-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2019
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Lou,
THANK YOU for your generous comments about those possibilities. Pleased you liked the entire combo.
Mark
Comment from Y. M. Roger
An interesting 5-7-5 offering for today -- takes a link between a child's imagination and peeking into the future ... great tie-together. :) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2019
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An interesting 5-7-5 offering for today -- takes a link between a child's imagination and peeking into the future ... great tie-together. :) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 26-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2019
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Thanks as always Yvette. Pleased you liked it.
Mark
Comment from 24chas
This was a good read, Mark. I love a poem about imagination, particularly children's imagination. It's so magical. Love the artwork as well, it really enhances the piece. Good job.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2019
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This was a good read, Mark. I love a poem about imagination, particularly children's imagination. It's so magical. Love the artwork as well, it really enhances the piece. Good job.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2019
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THANKS for your generous comments and rating. Glad it brought a smile to your day.
Mark
Comment from QC Poet
Beautifully Thought out visual picturesque lines for its Intended audience and some of us grandpa's !
Thanks for Sharing your Gifts and insight.
Good Luck and God Bless you.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2019
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Beautifully Thought out visual picturesque lines for its Intended audience and some of us grandpa's !
Thanks for Sharing your Gifts and insight.
Good Luck and God Bless you.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2019
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G,
Very pleased with your comments and starred review. Yep, grandpas rule!
M
Comment from Brigitte Elko
A twinkle in time, how cleverly said. Children do have a vivid imagination. Very nicely written. Thanks for sharing.
Love MK Flood's picture.
Many blessings,
Brigitte
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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A twinkle in time, how cleverly said. Children do have a vivid imagination. Very nicely written. Thanks for sharing.
Love MK Flood's picture.
Many blessings,
Brigitte
Comment Written 25-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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Brigitte,
THANKS for your look today. I try to use FanArt illustrations as my go-to choice. The ?eying? is how I see the cartoon characters looking out at us ... Sometimes even adults can have an imagination... LOL
Mark
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Imagination is key to relating to misunderstood things. I enjoyed reading. I have a vivid one that helps me through the day and night, lol.
Blessings,
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Mark
OMG - A twinkle in time - Stellar!
I love this one. Nothing at all to rework or consider improving upon here.
Great artwork makes for a lovely visual presentation.
Thanks for this delightful read!
Jan
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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Hi Mark
OMG - A twinkle in time - Stellar!
I love this one. Nothing at all to rework or consider improving upon here.
Great artwork makes for a lovely visual presentation.
Thanks for this delightful read!
Jan
Comment Written 25-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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You are welcome Jan! Glad it provided you a little twinkle for your stellar day.
Mark
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
Hello there, Mark. This is a lovely 5-7-5 poem. I love this line: "a twinkle in time"
It's quite magical. Enjoy your week, my friend. ~Kerry
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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Hello there, Mark. This is a lovely 5-7-5 poem. I love this line: "a twinkle in time"
It's quite magical. Enjoy your week, my friend. ~Kerry
Comment Written 25-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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Kerry,
Pleased this one gave you a twinkle in your mind. I have read and seen the movie, A Wrinkle in Time - a fun read!
Mark
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You're very welcome. So sorry for the late reply:))
Comment from Debbie Pope
This is another good one, Mark. That last line is outstanding--really outstanding. The photo is outstanding as well. The middle line is very, very good. I'd work on the first line though. Seeing the future? Is that what children's imagination is all about?Now you may be making a reference to Alice in Wonderland that I am not familiar with. In that case, ignore my comment.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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This is another good one, Mark. That last line is outstanding--really outstanding. The photo is outstanding as well. The middle line is very, very good. I'd work on the first line though. Seeing the future? Is that what children's imagination is all about?Now you may be making a reference to Alice in Wonderland that I am not familiar with. In that case, ignore my comment.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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Debbie,
I tossed about ?eying the future? but neither one is a reference to Alice. Unfortunately, ?peering into the future? has too many syllables for my thought.
Mark
