The Convict Train
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "Memories and friendships"Levi escorts a train full of dangerous convicts
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Comment from nancy_e_davis
It sounds as though Badger doesn't plan on cashing in his chips any time soon. LOL It stands to reason he will be there with Levi when he boards that train. It does sound like a dangerous job. I do believe his brothers will be there as well. Write on Larry. Well done. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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It sounds as though Badger doesn't plan on cashing in his chips any time soon. LOL It stands to reason he will be there with Levi when he boards that train. It does sound like a dangerous job. I do believe his brothers will be there as well. Write on Larry. Well done. Nancy:)
Comment Written 17-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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Thank you Nancy, I'm about four months to retirement and looking forward to finishing this story, and moving on with new ideas. I am very glad to hear from you, and anxious to hear what you think of this, as it progress. There are a few twists and turns coming that will, if not surprise you, should certainly entertain you. Take care, my friend. Larry
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I'm sure they will. :)
Comment from Candace Nola
Nicely done. Great dialogue. I enjoyed reading this chapter quite a lot. Great use of western terms. Descriptions could be a bit more vivid but overall very nicely done. The characters were nicely developed.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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Nicely done. Great dialogue. I enjoyed reading this chapter quite a lot. Great use of western terms. Descriptions could be a bit more vivid but overall very nicely done. The characters were nicely developed.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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Thank you Candace, for your kind review. I hope to finish this book in the next couple of months. I look forward to hearing from you again.
Comment from Poetic Friend
I was able to follow this story quite well, understanding the who is who and their history.
You did an excellent job of capturing the western time period -- the dialect, the character names, and the scenery.
As my time permits, I will read the subsequent chapters. I am rarely on FanStory.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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I was able to follow this story quite well, understanding the who is who and their history.
You did an excellent job of capturing the western time period -- the dialect, the character names, and the scenery.
As my time permits, I will read the subsequent chapters. I am rarely on FanStory.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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Thank you very much for your review. I have let my life take over for a while now, as it has taken it's own coarse, as it sometimes does. I too am not on FanStory as often as I would like to be. I hope to finish this book in the next couple of months, and I look forward to hearing from you again.
