The Convict Train
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Personal Struggles"Levi escorts a train full of dangerous convicts
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Comment from nancy_e_davis
from her [behavior] he was just as convinced (spelling)
I am so happy to see you are back to finish your story
Larry. It has been a long time. I do enjoy your Levi Sawyer books and plan to see it through. You make me feel like I am there and I have a special feeling for the people in your book. They are very special. Well done. Nancy:)!
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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from her [behavior] he was just as convinced (spelling)
I am so happy to see you are back to finish your story
Larry. It has been a long time. I do enjoy your Levi Sawyer books and plan to see it through. You make me feel like I am there and I have a special feeling for the people in your book. They are very special. Well done. Nancy:)!
Comment Written 17-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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Thank you, it's good to be back.
Comment from Mistydawn
This chapter is well-written, interesting. Your characters, dialogue, their actions seem real and your plot is believable. The ending makes you want to come back for more, nice job.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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This chapter is well-written, interesting. Your characters, dialogue, their actions seem real and your plot is believable. The ending makes you want to come back for more, nice job.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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Thank you for your kind review. I am looking forward to finishing this story, because when I write, I take the journey with my characters, and that makes it a lot of fun.
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I know the feeling. A lot of times I feel like my characters are making up the story, I'm just writing it down.
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Now that's a cool way of putting it.
Comment from Ben Colder
Sorry to come in on this write at this point as my judgment is not fruitful toward being much help. It is strong worded and seems to have a good plot. I did stumble with this for a minute. done, he saddled the Buckskin Lady, and rode into town, stopping at the Shariff's office. Horse I presume.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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Sorry to come in on this write at this point as my judgment is not fruitful toward being much help. It is strong worded and seems to have a good plot. I did stumble with this for a minute. done, he saddled the Buckskin Lady, and rode into town, stopping at the Shariff's office. Horse I presume.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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Hi Ben, thank you for your kind review. Yes, you are correct. The Buckskin Lady is Levi Sawyer's horse. Sally May is Badger's horse, and Dusty is Badger's mule. This is the last book in the Levi Sawyer trilogy. I hope to hear from you again as this story continues.
