Does a Bear...Well you Know
Animal Story / Poem contest entry6 total reviews
Comment from Chris Davies
That's cute and funny! Does a bear...? The picture was perfect, too. I enjoyed your poem it was very cleverly written. Thanks for sharing your poem and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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That's cute and funny! Does a bear...? The picture was perfect, too. I enjoyed your poem it was very cleverly written. Thanks for sharing your poem and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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Thank you for the great review, Chris. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from Rachelle Allen
HAHAHAHAHAHA. Omg - this one just slays me. Who knew bears were just like Real Life people??!! I had no idea! Terrific job with the humor, the verse, the rhymes, and even that picture you made. AWESOME entry here. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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HAHAHAHAHAHA. Omg - this one just slays me. Who knew bears were just like Real Life people??!! I had no idea! Terrific job with the humor, the verse, the rhymes, and even that picture you made. AWESOME entry here. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Rachelle. I really appreciate the gracious stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silliness. Have a great day.
Comment from JudyE
Poor bears! Remodelling a house can cause a whole heap of problems sometimes but at least Papa Bear held out for that one room! I picked up a spelling error. 'wallpaper isle' should be 'wallpaper aisle' unless 'isle' is American spelling. Thanks for a fun poem,
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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Poor bears! Remodelling a house can cause a whole heap of problems sometimes but at least Papa Bear held out for that one room! I picked up a spelling error. 'wallpaper isle' should be 'wallpaper aisle' unless 'isle' is American spelling. Thanks for a fun poem,
Comment Written 18-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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Thank you for the great review and for pointing out the goof, Just. I fixed it. I really appreciate the generous stars and help. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have a great day.
Comment from trimple
Good morning, Ron
Thank you for entering the contest and adhering to the rules.
Your poem is fun and lighthearted and you tell of bears squabbling over the decor of their home.
lol
LOve the picture.
Good luck
kind regards
tracey
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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Good morning, Ron
Thank you for entering the contest and adhering to the rules.
Your poem is fun and lighthearted and you tell of bears squabbling over the decor of their home.
lol
LOve the picture.
Good luck
kind regards
tracey
Comment Written 17-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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Thank you for the great review and for throwing the contest, Tracey. I'm guessing from the contest not going to booth that someone didn't write about animals in your ANIMAL contest? I don't get these people sometimes. I'm glad you liked this silliness. Have a great rest of your weekend.
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Afternoon, Ron
I reviewed every entry including the one you mention. I did remind the author of the rules, as well as a nudge in a thread. Still... the response was, thanks for the review and fuck all changed.
What can you do... I've decided to consider the plight of the polar bears... :)
Good luck, Ronster
Much love
tracey
Comment from kiwijenny
Yep you captured shopping for the house with a man... we she bears can get cantankerous and he bears ....don't get me started...lol I've had to bare claws to get what I wanted but we are older now and he trusts my decisions more...I was an art teacher for years... he's just so claws on...everything...
Oh and I love your poem...hil-bear-ious..
God bless
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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Yep you captured shopping for the house with a man... we she bears can get cantankerous and he bears ....don't get me started...lol I've had to bare claws to get what I wanted but we are older now and he trusts my decisions more...I was an art teacher for years... he's just so claws on...everything...
Oh and I love your poem...hil-bear-ious..
God bless
Comment Written 16-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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Lol. Thank you for the great review, Jenny. I really appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked this silliness. Have a great rest of your weekend.
Comment from Sandra Elizabeth Williams
Your poem has put a smile on my face :-)
The scene is kind of imaginable, I must say and I enjoyed the rhymes.
There is one error, however, where subject and verb do not agree
"she don't see the appeal." It should be "she doesn't...."
Other than that it is very good.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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Your poem has put a smile on my face :-)
The scene is kind of imaginable, I must say and I enjoyed the rhymes.
There is one error, however, where subject and verb do not agree
"she don't see the appeal." It should be "she doesn't...."
Other than that it is very good.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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Thank you for the great review, Sandra. Yeah, I knew about the 'doesn't.' It's just that writing it correctly adds another syllable in there that, to me, throws off the rhythm. I changed it to 'can't instead, so it will work. I really appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked this silly thing.
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LoL...you are welcome! OK, I understand re the doesn't... Can't will work.
