The End of the Edge
Life is what you make of it25 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for sharing your insights about life and wise counsel. I admired your rhymed quatrains--often mono-verse for extra emphasis. Here's to healthy and productive 2020- Joan
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2020
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Thank you for sharing your insights about life and wise counsel. I admired your rhymed quatrains--often mono-verse for extra emphasis. Here's to healthy and productive 2020- Joan
Comment Written 14-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2020
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Wow, it's been a long time since I visited this site.
Sorry to take so long to thank you for your kind review. My hands hurt too much to type on many days so I don't post much anymore.
As I've never learned much about how to properly build a poem I'm going to have to admit to ignorance about what a mono verse is, but I'm glad I was able to convey the emphasis I wanted to express.
Thanks again for reading and for your review.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This thought-provoking poem clearly conveys the theme that there
may be a very thin line between what we commonly think of as opposites. And--yes--what goes around does come around.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2019
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This thought-provoking poem clearly conveys the theme that there
may be a very thin line between what we commonly think of as opposites. And--yes--what goes around does come around.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2019
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Thank You for your review and input.
"D"
Comment from Louise Michelle
Yup, I agree with your sentiment. I enjoyed the fast pace of this poem, it read smoothly and the message was simply stated without being preachy.
Those deeds follow us beyond death, if you believe in an afterlife. Worse, they follow into another life, if you believe in reincarnation. Best Wishes, Lou
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2019
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Yup, I agree with your sentiment. I enjoyed the fast pace of this poem, it read smoothly and the message was simply stated without being preachy.
Those deeds follow us beyond death, if you believe in an afterlife. Worse, they follow into another life, if you believe in reincarnation. Best Wishes, Lou
Comment Written 18-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2019
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Thank You for your review and input.
"D"
Comment from A. Willow Bends
So much truth embedded within this little poem! I like it, the ideas within, the flow of it, the rhyme and rhythm. The truth of it is prevalent and you did a great job with this. Great job!
Wendy
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2019
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So much truth embedded within this little poem! I like it, the ideas within, the flow of it, the rhyme and rhythm. The truth of it is prevalent and you did a great job with this. Great job!
Wendy
Comment Written 18-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2019
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Thank You for your review and input.
"D"
Comment from jenintorre
I like your philosophy in this poem. I also like your excellent rhyme. Life certainly is what you make it ... well most of the time. Nice one. Cheers. Jen.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2019
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I like your philosophy in this poem. I also like your excellent rhyme. Life certainly is what you make it ... well most of the time. Nice one. Cheers. Jen.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2019
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Thanks!
"D"
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi there,
Thank you for sharing your thoughts in this poem. Life does go on, doesn't it? And so many people have differing opinions, but in the end, we will all end up in the same place.
Your style, rhythm, and rhyme worked well for this poem.
~Mustang Patty~
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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Hi there,
Thank you for sharing your thoughts in this poem. Life does go on, doesn't it? And so many people have differing opinions, but in the end, we will all end up in the same place.
Your style, rhythm, and rhyme worked well for this poem.
~Mustang Patty~
Comment Written 17-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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Yes we do all have differing opinions but it would be nice if we could accept each other anyway. Too often we don't seem to. Thank you for reading and reviewing another of my poems.
Comment from susand3022
Hello Delahay, I liked your poem, The Edge of The Edge, I found it to be very thought provoking and eloquent. The rhyme is also spot on. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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Hello Delahay, I liked your poem, The Edge of The Edge, I found it to be very thought provoking and eloquent. The rhyme is also spot on. Nicely done.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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Thank you for your review. I appreciate the feedback.
Comment from nancyjam
I enjoyed your well rhymed and metered poem.
Wise messages conveyed in these lines.
I especially liked the last two:
"The deeds we do and then deny
Follow us until we die"
Nancy
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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I enjoyed your well rhymed and metered poem.
Wise messages conveyed in these lines.
I especially liked the last two:
"The deeds we do and then deny
Follow us until we die"
Nancy
Comment Written 16-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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Thank you for letting me know what you liked about my poem. I appreciate the feedback.
Comment from rhonnie69
HELLO DELAHAY: I like your posting here in that it holds sooo much truth. According to our God's word. We reap what we sow...and there's no getting around it because our God said so.
"The deed we do and then deny...Yes...follow us until we die." Well said, my friend. This is good. You are good too. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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HELLO DELAHAY: I like your posting here in that it holds sooo much truth. According to our God's word. We reap what we sow...and there's no getting around it because our God said so.
"The deed we do and then deny...Yes...follow us until we die." Well said, my friend. This is good. You are good too. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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Thank you for you kind comments. I sometimes wonder if I want to reap what I've sown.
Comment from Suzie Q
Well done. Your title is perfect for your poem. I like the rhyme as well.
I especially liked " Those who can't see past their eye, Live a loss they can't defy. The deeds we do and then deny, follow is until we die" Well said. Good job!
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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Well done. Your title is perfect for your poem. I like the rhyme as well.
I especially liked " Those who can't see past their eye, Live a loss they can't defy. The deeds we do and then deny, follow is until we die" Well said. Good job!
Comment Written 16-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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Thank you for your feedback and kind comments.
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You're welcome