3-5-3 POTUS makes Rose Garden speech
Prez Trump signs Executive Order4 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 3-5-3, POTUS Makes Rose Garden Speech, has the proper formatting and seems to condemn the President's approach to the border wall issue. Looks like it'll be Pense against the Democrat in 2020.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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This 3-5-3, POTUS Makes Rose Garden Speech, has the proper formatting and seems to condemn the President's approach to the border wall issue. Looks like it'll be Pense against the Democrat in 2020.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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Thanks Bill for your review!
I tried with my 3-5-3 to convey my public displeasure with Trump's actions, albeit only espoused through this FS network.
Mark
Comment from Liz O'Neill
I don't listen to the news anymore and am finding myself much less depressed. I was going to bed depressed and waking up depressed. It all sickens me. I learn of tRumps actions from reading poems like this and some fb posts. I figure if anything happens that directly affects me someone will let me know. Instead of the wall being planted, I'm surprised no one has planted a certain person. Sadly too many will be rejoicing at this news. Well written. I am voting for this one.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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I don't listen to the news anymore and am finding myself much less depressed. I was going to bed depressed and waking up depressed. It all sickens me. I learn of tRumps actions from reading poems like this and some fb posts. I figure if anything happens that directly affects me someone will let me know. Instead of the wall being planted, I'm surprised no one has planted a certain person. Sadly too many will be rejoicing at this news. Well written. I am voting for this one.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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Thanks Liz! I felt I had to write something about this matter - just to get it off my chest. So my small public statement made it only to FanStory. My wife says, "Don't listen or read online about Trump and his sycophants. The news (and Trump'!) is all very depressing!"
Unfortunately, we must survive his craziness since we do live in a great country.
Mark
Comment from Sugarray77
You did a good job using this format to make a political point. I am having a bit of trouble understanding why you chose the word sprout... I see that you refer to a garden, but the emphasis is on a person, not the garden.... just wondering. Good luck.
Melissa
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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You did a good job using this format to make a political point. I am having a bit of trouble understanding why you chose the word sprout... I see that you refer to a garden, but the emphasis is on a person, not the garden.... just wondering. Good luck.
Melissa
Comment Written 15-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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Before reading your review, I had edited it sgain. Your concerns are duly noted, but I tried another way to express my political opposition. I am not very happy with my attempt (FS entry) to make a political point or the President's actions. I did want to get it off my chest. Somehow our great country must survive this craziness
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Hello.... since this is a contest interest, you need to edit this comment and take your name off... they will DQ you. I will def go and reread it. Thanks. Melissa
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi there,
Thank you for sharing your Three-Five-Three poem for the contest.
Who can believe what this one person has done to our constitution and government in just two short years? If only he'd studied Economics, International Diplomacy, or hadn't paid folks to write his papers in college - MAYBE he would be qualified to take the law into his own tiny hands,
Aargh,
~Mustang Patty~
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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Hi there,
Thank you for sharing your Three-Five-Three poem for the contest.
Who can believe what this one person has done to our constitution and government in just two short years? If only he'd studied Economics, International Diplomacy, or hadn't paid folks to write his papers in college - MAYBE he would be qualified to take the law into his own tiny hands,
Aargh,
~Mustang Patty~
Comment Written 15-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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Touche'!
Should I change middle line to:
'rhetoric sprouted (sic)' or rhetoric spouted?
sprouted is garden allusion!
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Keep the allusion - sprouted
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Aargh I changed it again!
garden speech
rhetoric sprouted
Prez plants wall
