Little Poems
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Comment from kiwijenny
Oooooo I liked looking at this side ways and slide ways ...and tilted it looks gilted a little bit
I know that should be gilded but it didn't rhyme... good choice with the photo...it has just been Valentines after all. King and Queen of hearts never parts...again we know it should be heart and part...sigh
Ok . I liked it a lot
God bless
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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Oooooo I liked looking at this side ways and slide ways ...and tilted it looks gilted a little bit
I know that should be gilded but it didn't rhyme... good choice with the photo...it has just been Valentines after all. King and Queen of hearts never parts...again we know it should be heart and part...sigh
Ok . I liked it a lot
God bless
Comment Written 15-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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Thank you kiwijenny, such a poetic review. I loved it.
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Comment from Teri7
This is a very interesting Crown Cinquain you have penned about the deck of cards and the queen and king. You used very good descriptive words in each poem and very appropriate imagery with the picture of the king and queen in the deck of cards. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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This is a very interesting Crown Cinquain you have penned about the deck of cards and the queen and king. You used very good descriptive words in each poem and very appropriate imagery with the picture of the king and queen in the deck of cards. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 15-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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Thank you, teri. I appreciate your review and comments.
Comment from trimple
Blimey! Tom
This is a cracker! I love the medieval feel to this thread of Cinquain poems. I stumbled a bit on this line though---
throughout the Middle Ages [scene's?]
Superb photography, Tom.
kind regards
tracey
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reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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Blimey! Tom
This is a cracker! I love the medieval feel to this thread of Cinquain poems. I stumbled a bit on this line though---
throughout the Middle Ages [scene's?]
Superb photography, Tom.
kind regards
tracey
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Comment Written 15-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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Thank you Tracey, it was tuff to get them to smile and sit still for their portraits. Be Lol.
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LMAO! I was referring to the clarity, ya plonker :)
Comment from patcelaw
I really like this format and the reading of it was easy to follow and understand. I am always in awe of your writing in so many formats. Blessings for a good weekend. Patricia
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I really like this format and the reading of it was easy to follow and understand. I am always in awe of your writing in so many formats. Blessings for a good weekend. Patricia
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Comment Written 15-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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Thank you Patricia, you have a good weekend too.
