Comment from KatyM

Excellent

My cure for loosing weight is to have my hubby go back to work! lol He tends to want to eat 3 or more meals a day. It's like he has a tape worm. Of course, when he eats I eat. He starts his new job on Monday and I can't wait.
Happy Writing, katy

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2019

Comment from country ranch writer

Excellent

This writing is so hard for me to read wow these eyes aren't used to squinting! Well you seem to have captured your audience so keep on doing what ever you are doing.

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2019

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

This is a good little opening for your book, although these kind of things are a (cliché warning) dime-a-dozen, so it really does need to be 'something' to set it apart.

it grabs the attention so I think folk would read on initially.

All the best
GMG

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2019

Comment from bhogg

Excellent

If your purpose was to generate some interest in further reading, you were successful. Starting with questions is a very good way to pull your reader in. Anxious to see where you go with this. Bill

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2019