Securely Happy
A 5-7-5-7-7 poem3 total reviews
Comment from LG Wolfe
I really like this poem, Mark. It flows along beautifully, adding to the stability of this relationships. It's so personal and direct -these are two true lovers who know and accept each other.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2019
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I really like this poem, Mark. It flows along beautifully, adding to the stability of this relationships. It's so personal and direct -these are two true lovers who know and accept each other.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh now this is an almost magical write you have here, Mark -- each line simply flows into the next with the conclusion being one of solid statement of belonging...great job! :) ;) thanx for sharing! ;)
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
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Oh now this is an almost magical write you have here, Mark -- each line simply flows into the next with the conclusion being one of solid statement of belonging...great job! :) ;) thanx for sharing! ;)
Comment Written 14-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from kiwisteveh
Hi, Mark.
I like this because you let the reader fill in between the lines - what is she coaxing him to do? Why is he so content to let her do so? You paint a picture of two people in love who know each other well.
Steve
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
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Hi, Mark.
I like this because you let the reader fill in between the lines - what is she coaxing him to do? Why is he so content to let her do so? You paint a picture of two people in love who know each other well.
Steve
Comment Written 14-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
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Thank you for your review.
