Scene at a Cemetery
Pons and Ned meet at an empty grave18 total reviews
Comment from Aiona
What a funny and silly script! It has good characterization with distinct dialogue, and even without the color coding, I could tell who was talking. Is this for stage or screen?
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2019
What a funny and silly script! It has good characterization with distinct dialogue, and even without the color coding, I could tell who was talking. Is this for stage or screen?
Comment Written 11-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2019
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I picture a drama class option for teens or young adults. Thanks for the nice review.
Comment from Earl Corp
You ever hear Ray Stevens song Sittin Up With the Dead, in it he talks about falling in an empty grave and the gravedigger telling him to sit down because he wasn't getting out "But I Did."
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
You ever hear Ray Stevens song Sittin Up With the Dead, in it he talks about falling in an empty grave and the gravedigger telling him to sit down because he wasn't getting out "But I Did."
Comment Written 17-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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Missed that one. I?ll look it up.
Comment from Gloria ....
Haaaaaa, I always love your Pons and Ned scripts and this is right up there as mighty fine. It's probable shortly now that the only gravesites left in a while will be at the North Pole.
Excellent script with lots of quirky fun and humour.
Gloria
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
Haaaaaa, I always love your Pons and Ned scripts and this is right up there as mighty fine. It's probable shortly now that the only gravesites left in a while will be at the North Pole.
Excellent script with lots of quirky fun and humour.
Gloria
Comment Written 16-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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Thanks, Gloria
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Yes, one would have to agree that life for Pons is never dull with ol' Ned around to keep a smile going at every turn....even keeps the brain in gear trying to follow "Ned-reasoning" during a conversation! :) ;) Thanx for sharing that smile this morning...only Ned could connect grave sites to Santa Clause! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
Yes, one would have to agree that life for Pons is never dull with ol' Ned around to keep a smile going at every turn....even keeps the brain in gear trying to follow "Ned-reasoning" during a conversation! :) ;) Thanx for sharing that smile this morning...only Ned could connect grave sites to Santa Clause! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 16-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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He is a caution.
Comment from lyenochka
I'm beginning to think that Ned has some super power to always appear like that. Or maybe that super power only affects Pons. I liked the funny time-confused interchange about future borrowed money being repaid last week.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
I'm beginning to think that Ned has some super power to always appear like that. Or maybe that super power only affects Pons. I liked the funny time-confused interchange about future borrowed money being repaid last week.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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Ned gets around.
Comment from Ulla
Hahahahahahaha, I'm laughing my head off. What are you like, Bill. and now the poor Santa has dracula teeths, not forgetting you wish him dead and burried .LOL Oh, dear. I just don't know what this world has come to! I wish I had a six. I'm still laughing!!! Ulla:))
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
Hahahahahahaha, I'm laughing my head off. What are you like, Bill. and now the poor Santa has dracula teeths, not forgetting you wish him dead and burried .LOL Oh, dear. I just don't know what this world has come to! I wish I had a six. I'm still laughing!!! Ulla:))
Comment Written 15-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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Thank you, Ulla.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Well, Bill, I'll have know that I'm nice, except for the rare times I've been naughty, but Santa understood, since I was sitting on his lap at the time.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
Well, Bill, I'll have know that I'm nice, except for the rare times I've been naughty, but Santa understood, since I was sitting on his lap at the time.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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That sounds like a story to be told.
Comment from nomi338
Ha, ha, one of the things I love most about Ned is that he makes me feel so much smarter than I probably am. As a matter of fact Ned makes almost everybody seem smarter. He is an absolute genius at that.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
Ha, ha, one of the things I love most about Ned is that he makes me feel so much smarter than I probably am. As a matter of fact Ned makes almost everybody seem smarter. He is an absolute genius at that.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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Genius at doubtness --- an oxymoron.
Comment from Miss Sherry
Naughty or nice, huh? OOkaayyy You have presented us with another earth-shattering question. What is mental illness and how does it present itself?
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
Naughty or nice, huh? OOkaayyy You have presented us with another earth-shattering question. What is mental illness and how does it present itself?
Comment Written 15-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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Is that a rhetorical question or should I ask the voices?
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Are your voices republican or democrat??
Comment from Teri7
Oh my - Pons and Ned just won't do! This is another very cute script you have penned about them being at the cemetery looking for a plot. You used very cute words and great imagery from the art work you chose. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
Oh my - Pons and Ned just won't do! This is another very cute script you have penned about them being at the cemetery looking for a plot. You used very cute words and great imagery from the art work you chose. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 15-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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Thanks, Teri