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Scene at a Cemetery

Pons and Ned meet at an empty grave

18 total reviews 
Comment from Aiona
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What a funny and silly script! It has good characterization with distinct dialogue, and even without the color coding, I could tell who was talking. Is this for stage or screen?

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2019


reply by the author on 12-Mar-2019
    I picture a drama class option for teens or young adults. Thanks for the nice review.
Comment from Earl Corp
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You ever hear Ray Stevens song Sittin Up With the Dead, in it he talks about falling in an empty grave and the gravedigger telling him to sit down because he wasn't getting out "But I Did."

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
    Missed that one. I?ll look it up.
Comment from Gloria ....
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Haaaaaa, I always love your Pons and Ned scripts and this is right up there as mighty fine. It's probable shortly now that the only gravesites left in a while will be at the North Pole.

Excellent script with lots of quirky fun and humour.

Gloria

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
    Thanks, Gloria
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Yes, one would have to agree that life for Pons is never dull with ol' Ned around to keep a smile going at every turn....even keeps the brain in gear trying to follow "Ned-reasoning" during a conversation! :) ;) Thanx for sharing that smile this morning...only Ned could connect grave sites to Santa Clause! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
    He is a caution.
Comment from lyenochka
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I'm beginning to think that Ned has some super power to always appear like that. Or maybe that super power only affects Pons. I liked the funny time-confused interchange about future borrowed money being repaid last week.

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
    Ned gets around.
Comment from Ulla
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Hahahahahahaha, I'm laughing my head off. What are you like, Bill. and now the poor Santa has dracula teeths, not forgetting you wish him dead and burried .LOL Oh, dear. I just don't know what this world has come to! I wish I had a six. I'm still laughing!!! Ulla:))

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
    Thank you, Ulla.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
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Well, Bill, I'll have know that I'm nice, except for the rare times I've been naughty, but Santa understood, since I was sitting on his lap at the time.

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
    That sounds like a story to be told.
Comment from nomi338
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Ha, ha, one of the things I love most about Ned is that he makes me feel so much smarter than I probably am. As a matter of fact Ned makes almost everybody seem smarter. He is an absolute genius at that.

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
    Genius at doubtness --- an oxymoron.
Comment from Miss Sherry
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Naughty or nice, huh? OOkaayyy You have presented us with another earth-shattering question. What is mental illness and how does it present itself?

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
    Is that a rhetorical question or should I ask the voices?
reply by Miss Sherry on 15-Feb-2019
    Are your voices republican or democrat??
Comment from Teri7
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Oh my - Pons and Ned just won't do! This is another very cute script you have penned about them being at the cemetery looking for a plot. You used very cute words and great imagery from the art work you chose. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
    Thanks, Teri