Apocalypse Now
Time is fast approaching.17 total reviews
Comment from l.raven
Hi Kace, people haven't seen anything here yet...
Armageddon will be Hell on earth...very well spoken Sweetie Pie...a great Flash Fiction entry..love your story told you...and the picture speaks for itself...love you much my sweet friend...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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Hi Kace, people haven't seen anything here yet...
Armageddon will be Hell on earth...very well spoken Sweetie Pie...a great Flash Fiction entry..love your story told you...and the picture speaks for itself...love you much my sweet friend...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 15-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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Hello luverly Linda, Thanks for reading precious friend. Love, Kay.
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Hello luverlyest Kace, you girl are always so welcome....lots of love...xxoo
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Big hugs for momma bear from dis old baby bear. How are you darling girl? XXKace.
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a lot better...in about a week or so my doctor is going to repeat my test...pray for better results...hope your doing well...much love xxoo
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You forgot, or I forgot what is your medical problem? :-) XX Kace.
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just some stomach problems....sigh...smiling big back at you on this cold, icey, snowy day...LOL...love ya...xxoo
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My computer has been down. I'm back now honey-bun. I am worried about your tummy problems. I have three hernias in that area! Love ya girl XXXX Kace.
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it will be ok Sweetie Pie...it's not a hernia...but you better take it easy...my friend John who just had the lung cancer had to have a hernia surgery yesterday...they said it was a pretty bad tear...and today we were back at the ER...he is having bad reaction to something in surgery...you would think they would used something different...so sad...sigh...missed you...but didn't know it was because of your computer...but I do know how that feels...I have been there...not to worry about me...I worry enough about you....love ya too...wish we could meet...sigh...Linda xxoo
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Linda Louie, Now, don't you go worrying about this old girl. I'm not getting anymore surgery if the Lord looks after my protruding belly-button. I have had enough surgery to start a hospital. My thoughts are, if it works, leave it alone. How is John? I had hernia surgery last year and they found the other three. It is because I am confined to a w/chair and can't walk enough, or it maybe too many burgers! I watch what I eat and eat what I watch. My philosophy is; when it is our time to go ta, ta. Then it is time's up. You didn't tell me what was wrong with your tummy? Fairs fair - your turn now platypus! Much love, Kace.
Comment from Sasha
I realize many believe that this will come to pass. We are destroying the world ourselves and creating our own Armageddon which once it starts, we won't be able to stop. GReat work with this, it really captured my attention and imagination.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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I realize many believe that this will come to pass. We are destroying the world ourselves and creating our own Armageddon which once it starts, we won't be able to stop. GReat work with this, it really captured my attention and imagination.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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Hi Sasha, Never a truer word was spoken. Thanks for reading my friend.Love, Kay.
Comment from tfawcus
A dire prediction that you have portrayed in graphic detail. I'm always a bit suspicious of fire and brimstone scriptures, which were probably concocted to keep the flock in line. I've always felt that true Christianity is based on love, not fear.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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A dire prediction that you have portrayed in graphic detail. I'm always a bit suspicious of fire and brimstone scriptures, which were probably concocted to keep the flock in line. I've always felt that true Christianity is based on love, not fear.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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Hello my friend, thanks for reading. We have done a great job destroying the gift god gave us. Yes, He loves us but we have destroyed his gift of the planet. No one really knows when, the signs are there all over the World. Bless you, Kay.
Comment from Gloria ....
A very scary flash fiction story of Armageddon, K. You've used lean, terse language to illustrate the setting, conflict and resolution.
I wish you much luck with the Contest Committee.
Gloria
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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A very scary flash fiction story of Armageddon, K. You've used lean, terse language to illustrate the setting, conflict and resolution.
I wish you much luck with the Contest Committee.
Gloria
Comment Written 15-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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Hi Gloria, Thanks for reading. I didn't pull any punches because of only having 150 words to play with. Blessings, Kay.
Comment from Sugarray77
What a vivid and eloquent write for the Flash Fiction contest... I would mention that once when I entered a Flash Fiction and wrote something that they deemed was not fiction, that they DQd me. Just a heads up ... in your notes you make this a documented essay.
Melissa
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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What a vivid and eloquent write for the Flash Fiction contest... I would mention that once when I entered a Flash Fiction and wrote something that they deemed was not fiction, that they DQd me. Just a heads up ... in your notes you make this a documented essay.
Melissa
Comment Written 15-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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Yeah, but it's my version. It is fiction because nothing has been proven. We know the signs across the world with all the fires, famine, floods and man's inhumanity to man. I don't really care about winning. I just write because I love it. Cheers, Kay.
Comment from QC Poet
Some believe that is how earth was formed before in times of old. Interesting concept,
Thank you for sharing this poem and thought provoking poetry. Blessings to you.
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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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Some believe that is how earth was formed before in times of old. Interesting concept,
Thank you for sharing this poem and thought provoking poetry. Blessings to you.
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Comment Written 15-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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Indeed, God formed the earth and he will destroy it; If he chooses. We have done a great job of destroying the gift he gave us. Blessings, Kay.
Comment from kiwijenny
Yikes yikes yikes did I say yikes yikes yikes. There is always a remnant who have not disobeyed God...we are going to be praying so much
Well penned ...
God bless
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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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Yikes yikes yikes did I say yikes yikes yikes. There is always a remnant who have not disobeyed God...we are going to be praying so much
Well penned ...
God bless
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Comment Written 15-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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G'day Kiwi! Your home country has a fault-line right down the middle and see the black sands, volcanic in origin. When and how we do not know. We do however see the signs of destruction all over the World today (as forecast in the Bible) famine, floods, fires, deaths - it is happening now. He did say believers would be lifted up whole (those who believe in Him) I would rather be lifted up and be a whole person than having one leg and so much pain, living hell on earth. Loads of love to you mate XXK.
