Apocalypse Now
Time is fast approaching.17 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Kace. This is an older post of yours as I didn't see anything new. A powerful write. Well described throughout on the prophecy. Best of luck in the contest if it isn't over. Marilyn
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2019
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Hi Kace. This is an older post of yours as I didn't see anything new. A powerful write. Well described throughout on the prophecy. Best of luck in the contest if it isn't over. Marilyn
Comment Written 30-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2019
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Thanks Marilyn for reading an old post. I feel strongly about End of Days. Bless you, Kace XX
Comment from estory
I thought it was an interesting retelling of Revelations in some more contemporary terms, with references to cities and events affecting us in a little more personal way. It puts us more into the story and makes us think, as we see ourselves in it. I think you had some great colorful language and that served to make it come alive more. You did a good job with the space. estory
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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I thought it was an interesting retelling of Revelations in some more contemporary terms, with references to cities and events affecting us in a little more personal way. It puts us more into the story and makes us think, as we see ourselves in it. I think you had some great colorful language and that served to make it come alive more. You did a good job with the space. estory
Comment Written 16-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind comments. Blessings, Kay.
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Frightening thoughts. We should all live in fear of that terrible day unless we know and trust in God. This is full of sorrowful images. well done Kaye. Good entry. Good Luck. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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Frightening thoughts. We should all live in fear of that terrible day unless we know and trust in God. This is full of sorrowful images. well done Kaye. Good entry. Good Luck. Nancy:)
Comment Written 16-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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Hi Nancy, Thanks so much for reading and really, no fear from me because I know my Redeemer Liveth and I shall stand on the last day - as will you. Love, Kay.
Comment from humpwhistle
You paint a very vivid and frightening picture.
Whether one is religious or not, the end of the earth, and this solar system is preordained. Our sun has a natural expiration date.
Perhaps that's the Armageddon as foretold.
Good entry for the Flash Fiction contest.
Best of luck.
Peace, Lee
Across the World earthlings huddle in concrete bunkers--Just a nit, but are earthlings really spread across the world at this point? Or across the globe?
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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You paint a very vivid and frightening picture.
Whether one is religious or not, the end of the earth, and this solar system is preordained. Our sun has a natural expiration date.
Perhaps that's the Armageddon as foretold.
Good entry for the Flash Fiction contest.
Best of luck.
Peace, Lee
Across the World earthlings huddle in concrete bunkers--Just a nit, but are earthlings really spread across the world at this point? Or across the globe?
Comment Written 16-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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Hi Lee, Thanks so much for reading. We know not when, but we all know it is coming. Blessings, Kay. XX
Earthlings is a general term for humans all over the World.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
This is all happening now, the earthquakes, the floods, the fires, hunger, disease. The ice caps are melting, and the oceans have been destroyed by us. God isn't destroying the Earth, we are. I am sure He is distraught at seeing His gift abused the way it is. The is a really excellent contest entry, Kay, and I wish you loads of luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xxx
Hope you are both well? xx
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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This is all happening now, the earthquakes, the floods, the fires, hunger, disease. The ice caps are melting, and the oceans have been destroyed by us. God isn't destroying the Earth, we are. I am sure He is distraught at seeing His gift abused the way it is. The is a really excellent contest entry, Kay, and I wish you loads of luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xxx
Hope you are both well? xx
Comment Written 16-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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Hello my dear friend Sandra, Glad you got my drift in 150 words. Nobody can say they can't see or feel what is happening right now. Mother Earth has had enough and there is no going back now. Still, He said we would be lifted up with Him in the last days, so faith is our firm foundation. I miss reading your poems? Everything OK? Much love and hugs, KXX
Comment from 24chas
This is a scary thought, Aussie. It's also been foretold and you did a good job of conveying this in your flash fiction entry. Nice job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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This is a scary thought, Aussie. It's also been foretold and you did a good job of conveying this in your flash fiction entry. Nice job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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G'day Chas, Thank you for dropping in to read. For those who have eyes to see and ears to listen, it is all happening now.
Blessings, Kay.
Comment from royowen
Well done, if the sun gives out alone, all life will be no more, we'll just be icicles. But this is well written and it could be signs of the end times, although the earth goes on for a thousand years after Christ's return. But this will scare a few people Kay, well done, blessjngs, Roy
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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Well done, if the sun gives out alone, all life will be no more, we'll just be icicles. But this is well written and it could be signs of the end times, although the earth goes on for a thousand years after Christ's return. But this will scare a few people Kay, well done, blessjngs, Roy
Comment Written 16-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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Thanks so much Roy. Blessings, Kay.
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Comment from Stephanie Launiu
Wow, this is awesome. You just wrote the trailer for a dynamite movie, or the book cover for a winning novel. The words you chose to tell your story in just 150 words were carefully and successfully chosen. Bravo. They should just give you the prize now and save everybody time.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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Wow, this is awesome. You just wrote the trailer for a dynamite movie, or the book cover for a winning novel. The words you chose to tell your story in just 150 words were carefully and successfully chosen. Bravo. They should just give you the prize now and save everybody time.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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Hey Stephanie, Thanks so much my friend. blessings, Kay.
Comment from patcelaw
There are no more things that were foretold in scripture that have to be fulfilled before the Lord appears and the tribulation begins. I am ready for the day. I hope others are a well. Patricia
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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There are no more things that were foretold in scripture that have to be fulfilled before the Lord appears and the tribulation begins. I am ready for the day. I hope others are a well. Patricia
Comment Written 15-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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Thank you for reading Patricia. Love, Kay.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written Flash Fiction story you have penned for the Flash Fiction contest. It is a time that is not so far off I do believe. You used very good words and very good imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest my friend! love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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This is a very well written Flash Fiction story you have penned for the Flash Fiction contest. It is a time that is not so far off I do believe. You used very good words and very good imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest my friend! love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 15-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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Hi Teri, We are more than ready my friend. Love, Kay.
