Comment from rspoet

Excellent

Hello Craig,
This is an excellent acrostic poem for the Valentines contest;
you even managed to get an interesting rhyme pattern in there.
The burning embers of wood would be nice, but coal rhymes better.
Complements is a nice way to look at it.
Well done
Best wishes to you
Robert




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 Comment Written 13-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2019

Thanks very much, Robert for the great review. I love wood fires, maybe I should have gone that way -- I'd feel less like an environmental traitor :) Much appreciated -- Craig

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

This is an awesome love poem for your wife, Craig. I enjoyed reading it. I really like your color scheme--especially the color of fire with the first letter of each line. Your rhymes are super, too. Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest. Jan

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 Comment Written 13-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2019

Thanks so much for the lovely review, Jan. I really appreciate it :) Craig