Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

This is a very nicely composed poem for your special person. When we find the right one, we know it. I like that you have composed an acrostic using her name. Lovely. Marilyn

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019

Thanks, Marilyn. Much appreciated -- Craig

Comment from rama devi

Excellent

Sweet love poem rich in metaphor. Great title.

Happy Valentine's Day!

I'm hardly here these days--busy editing multiple books for clients.

Warmly,
rd

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019

Glad to hear you're keeping busy, RD :)

Thanks for the good wishes, Happy Valentines to you, too!

Most grateful,
Craig

reply by rama devi on 14-Feb-2019

:-)))

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

And together you make up much more than a whole. Great little acrostic poem to give tribute to your beloved one! I liked the last line best and I could ignore the "coal" reference. Lol.

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019

LOL Thanks, Helen. I felt dirty, putting a reference to coal in, but it was needed :) Most grateful, Craig

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

Well done, Craig, on crafting this great verse for your honey, Jayne. Your love and affection shines through so beautifully. Well done and good luck.
All the best,


Melissa

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019

Thanks so much, Melissa. I appreciate the lovely comments. Cheers, Craig

Comment from Miss Sherry

Excellent

I love your little joke. This is just a darling Valentine's Day poem. Your Jayne will love this. I admire the love that transpires between people. It keeps happiness close and loneliness away. Very well presented!!

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019

Thanks very much, Sherry. The wonderful comments are much appreciated. Craig

reply by Miss Sherry on 14-Feb-2019

You are so very welcome!

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Okay, so as a nerd and former programmer, I ABSOLUTELY love this one, Craig!! :) ;) Wonderful words for a very special Jayne -- be sure to give her a printed (or better yet, hand write it!) copy. So very heartwarming to read of a perfect match of real- and cyber-space (LOL!). Thanx for sharing! ;);) Yvette

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019

Thanks, Yvette, for the lovely review. Jayne did like it (then again, she might be biased) lol Cheers, Craig

Comment from Thomas Bowling

Excellent

A great tribute to your special valentine. I'm sure someone will be very happy to read this. This is an excellent contest entry and will do well in the voting booth.

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019

Thanks very much, Thomas. I'm grateful for the kind comments, though not all that confident it will do well. Still, the recipient enjoyed it :) Cheers, Craig

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Oh for gawd's sake this isn't the "nothing" you put in your profile thoughts. In fact this is rather delightful and I'm pretty positive Jayne will be thrilled. I especially like the author notes because they are the logical outcome of two's complement.

Best of luck to you with the Contest Committee. This is a gooder.

Gloria

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2019

Thanks so much, Gloria :)

I hope she likes it, too. If not, since you said you did, it's yours lol

Cheers,
Craig

Comment from Debbie Pope

Excellent

What a sweet Valentine poem. Have you got another present on hand? This poem should do nicely. I like your rhymes and the use of your computer skills. Jayne should be pleased.
Happy Valentine's Day.

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2019

Another present?

Well, I would have cooked her a lovely dinner, if we weren't expecting a bunch of people over to bash away on ukuleles (that's our romantic Valentine's evening). So it will be leftovers from last night instead.

We'll see what my trip into town brings ;-)

Thanks so much, Debbie.

Craig

reply by Debbie Pope on 13-Feb-2019

You play the ukulele and have ukulele jam sessions? That is too cool. And, you cook? That is amazing.

Comment from bichonfrisegirl

Excellent

Ever so lovely, Craig! Your Jayne will love it! "You are the one, my source of light and heat" ... what woman wouldn't want to hear that?!

This is an excellent entry for the Acrostic Valentine contest. Very well written and beautifully presented. Love the pic of the roaring fire. Very romantic.

Cheers,
Connie

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2019

Thanks so much for the lovely comments, Connie. I'm very glad that you think she'll like the poem. If she doesn't, I guess I'm in trouble lol

Most grateful :)

Craig

reply by bichonfrisegirl on 13-Feb-2019

lol ... I don't think you'll be in trouble, Craig. :):)