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Comment from Joan E.
WOW--what a dramatic and vivid presentation and artwork selection. I admired your thought-provoking question and title. Best wishes in the 5-7-5 contest and have a serene Sunday- Joan
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2019
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WOW--what a dramatic and vivid presentation and artwork selection. I admired your thought-provoking question and title. Best wishes in the 5-7-5 contest and have a serene Sunday- Joan
Comment Written 17-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2019
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HELLO JOAN E: I thank you for complementing my poem. You are appreciated. God bless you. Cordially; rhonnie69.
Comment from tempeste
Ciao mystery poet!
I gave you your second vote..
Your entry left an impression on me..I found it smart...the wording and the beautiful picture of the alien create so many different interpretations / meanings to the word "Earth"
The first and last phrase ( a saying) contraddict each other. The middle phrase reveals that the person (the alien in the pic) is not from earth.
For me your entry ia a standout and I honestly think it is worth a six star vote..
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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Ciao mystery poet!
I gave you your second vote..
Your entry left an impression on me..I found it smart...the wording and the beautiful picture of the alien create so many different interpretations / meanings to the word "Earth"
The first and last phrase ( a saying) contraddict each other. The middle phrase reveals that the person (the alien in the pic) is not from earth.
For me your entry ia a standout and I honestly think it is worth a six star vote..
Comment Written 15-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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HELLO TEMPESTE: I thank you for complementing my poem. Thank you for the six stars. I needed...and I appreciate them. What you have done for me here is extremely encouraging. Again...I thank you. God bless you and yours. Cordially: rhonnie69.
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You deserved the six stars .It was a pleasure reading your work .. Your poem should have made the podium ..your entry showed a sharp mind ...
Sometimes I think people are wearing blinkers when they vote ..
Ciao !
Comment from sfharper
Fun resonance between the first and last line. It works good with the format and fits a science fiction theme, especially with the wonderful image. It works in general too, enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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Fun resonance between the first and last line. It works good with the format and fits a science fiction theme, especially with the wonderful image. It works in general too, enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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HELLO SFHARPER: I thank you for complementing my poem. You are appreciated. You have encouraged me here. Again...I thank you. God bless you and yours. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
lol, This is a really cute 5-7-5, Rhonnie. My guess is you're on one of Saturns moons. lol. Have a good night! ~Kerry
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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lol, This is a really cute 5-7-5, Rhonnie. My guess is you're on one of Saturns moons. lol. Have a good night! ~Kerry
Comment Written 14-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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HELLO KERRY: I thank you for complementing my poem. I'm glad that you liked it. You are appreciated. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.
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You're very welcome, Rhonnie
Comment from mkflood
Lol .well I'm glad you like her..I was kinda being a smart tail for some contest. That's why I titled it "Different Galaxy Same Problem"..I'm sure Captain Kirk from Star Trek would have fits..lol.. cute poem. I do thank you for selecting my work. It is an honor to have my work included with yours. Great job and thanks again.. MKFlood
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2019
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Lol .well I'm glad you like her..I was kinda being a smart tail for some contest. That's why I titled it "Different Galaxy Same Problem"..I'm sure Captain Kirk from Star Trek would have fits..lol.. cute poem. I do thank you for selecting my work. It is an honor to have my work included with yours. Great job and thanks again.. MKFlood
Comment Written 13-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2019
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HEEEEY MK: It's me, dude. I'm trying to reach you. I sent you a message to your email address today. I've got so much to talk to you about. I need your phone number.... SEE! your work and mine combined. Cool huh? I told you so. Call me. @ (609) 377-5457. I've got good news for you. And like I said in my notes: "WOW! Your Cutie pie...is, "FAR OUT." I love her. It is an honor to have my work included with yours. Tweedle-dee...there's more to see. Tweedle-dum...there's more to come. Thanx, Buddy. God bless you and yours. Cordially: Your partner. Rhon. P.S. Did you get my package?
Comment from BeasPeas
I like this 5-7-5 poem. Very clever and I wish you best of luck in the contest. The image is humorous and playful. Works well with your piece. Marilyn
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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I like this 5-7-5 poem. Very clever and I wish you best of luck in the contest. The image is humorous and playful. Works well with your piece. Marilyn
Comment Written 13-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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HELLO BEASPEAS: Thank you for viewing my poem. You are appreciated. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment from moongirlwriter
This is fun. . .plain and simple, pure fun. Love these spontaneous, little pieces of few words. They just really start the creative juices going for BIGGER more important words to say. Thanks for sharing this piece with us all.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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This is fun. . .plain and simple, pure fun. Love these spontaneous, little pieces of few words. They just really start the creative juices going for BIGGER more important words to say. Thanks for sharing this piece with us all.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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HELLO MOONGIRLWRITER: Thank you for viewing my poem. You are appreciated. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.
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Comment from estory
I liked how you played around with the words "earth" "Am" and "I" and that created a more interesting echoing effect in the music of the language. It was a bit of a tongue twister and a nice effect. estory
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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I liked how you played around with the words "earth" "Am" and "I" and that created a more interesting echoing effect in the music of the language. It was a bit of a tongue twister and a nice effect. estory
Comment Written 13-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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HELLO ESTORY: Thank you for viewing my poem.You are appreciated. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.
