Comment from Mistydawn

Excellent

This is a wonderful poem. A great look into your life, the transition you made that turned your life around. It's very well-written descriptive. Your great word choice painted a clear picture of your journey in our minds.

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019

Thank you for your nice review.

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I admired your use of repeating rhyming sounds and some repeating words to intensify your message in this spiritual poem. The picture you selected reinforces your theme well. Cheers- Joan

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019

Thank you for the understanding review.

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Hi Patricia. Well done. Your poem has good rhyming and theme. Best lines for me are these:
"He guides me day by day
and in His love I will stay."
Marilyn

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019

Thank you for your understanding review.

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

Patricia, I love your beautiful faith-filled verse. You did a good job sharing your faith and walk with the Lord.... your testimony is an encouragement to others. Well done.

Melissa

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019

Thank you for your understanding review.

Comment from Janice Canerdy

Excellent

Your well-written, exuberant, spiritual poem gives a beautiful testimony
of salvation and the incomparable, miraculous change it brings. The rhyming
is a good enhancement.

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2019

Thanks for your lovely understanding review.

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Hi, Patricia,

How are you doing? I'm glad to see a Poem from you after reading about your fall.

Thank you for sharing this lovely poem to remind us of his love and offer of eternal life.

Well done,

~patty~

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2019

Thanks for your great understanding review. I am doing okay, just very sore in my chest and back. I cannot lay flat in bed to sleep so what sleep I get is in my recliner. There is just lots of internal bruising and that always takes time to heal.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Thank you, Patricia, for your testimony poem. I do appreciate that you remind us that we were all on the "scoffer" side before we turned in faith to accept the gift of salvation!

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2019

Thanks for your great understanding review.

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi, Pat

= I enjoyed the rhyming pattern in this.
= Nicely penned with a good message within.
= Beautiful scene associated with cross as well.

Cheers, J (*<*)

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2019

Thanks for your great understanding review.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written spiritual poem. He offer himself to us only when we are willing to take on His offer we will see His greatness.

Typos
when I cane(came)where Jesus shed His blood
because I took of(on) His offer.

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2019

Thanks for a nice and understanding review. The corrections have been made. It is intended to be (took of His offer).

Comment from Irish Rain

Excellent

Beautifully honest and feeling poem.
Your writing, I know, influences so many to also make the same choice.
A lovely gift.
One tiny mistake....where it should say 'where I came'....you have 'where I cane.'
A lovely poem Miss Patricia,
Blessings...

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2019

Thanks for a nice and understanding review. The corrections have been made.

reply by Irish Rain on 13-Feb-2019

It's a lovely poem!