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Poems, Rants, Short Stories and Ramblings

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Comment from Y. M. Roger
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This was such a delightful offering for this 'fruity fiction' prose competition -- thank you so very much for entertaining us! ;) ;) Great fruit to non-fiction twist!! ;) :) Y.M.

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
    Thank you for the review and great confidence building comments.
Comment from HealingMuse
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Hi Mystery Author,

Very nicely written.

A great contest entry - good luck in the voting booth.

Ha ha. Nice image complements your verse effectively.

Thanks for sharing,

Jan

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 13-Feb-2019
    Thank you for the review and encouragement.
Comment from Stephanie Launiu
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I have to agree with most of what you wrote about modern politics. It truly is bananas. Your writing would probably benefit from punctuation since you capitalized certain words. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 13-Feb-2019
    Thank you for the review.