Comment from trimple

Excellent

Good afternoon, Bill

Oh, I cracked up reading this.

I love the interaction between these two characters of yours.

Are ya okay? This is the kinda accident what causes folks ta get that whipped splash

A lawwer is a fella what makes up stuff in court to git guilty folks off on a tectiphallacy.

If I was you I'd take yer car home first...

Top write and really made me giggle :)

Poor Ned, lol

kind regards

tracey

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019

Thank you, Tracey, for the generous review. Bill

reply by trimple on 15-Feb-2019

Loved it, Bill :)

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

A very fun interaction, Sir Bill -- no one except Pons seems to know what to make of the special Ned...LOL! ;) :) You're really good at these 'play on words' and other such 'misunderstanding' to really make Ned such an adorable figure! :) :) thanx for sharing! ;) ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019

Thanks, Yvette

Comment from brenda faye curtis

Excellent

This script is well-constructed, and Pons and Ned are their usual selves, but I felt like it needed a bit more interaction from the other driver. I like the police officer character, and that you developed him very well by his reactions and expressions.

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019

Can?t let a walk-on upstage the boys.

reply by brenda faye curtis on 15-Feb-2019

Ok, I get it. :)

Comment from TheStoryMan

Excellent

Oh these two have me laughing again. I sit and laugh at the things Ned says. You are a truly funny man. Thank you for sharing your humor with us. Laughter is the best medicine for whatever ails you.

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019

Thanks, TSM

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hahahaha. yeah, Bill, I love them what a pair. So the other driver was trying to shift the blame away from himself with all sorts of accusations. I'm glad it didn't work out. Great stuff. All best. Ulla:))

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019

Thanks, Ulla

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

You'll have to explain how you can crank these out so quickly! Ned seems to be without transportation himself at the moment. Pans keeps pretty cool after the accident, unlike the irate driver who threatens to sue. Love Ned's definition of a lawyer--making stuff up to get guilty folks up on a tectiphallicy. Funny about how how he says he was being infizzible. Afraid Ned's not much help there. Great fun. judi

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2019

Thanks, Judi

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

The nerve of some people. Clearly the guy who rear ended Pons was at fault, even Ned could see that despite being infizzible. Some people are bold enough to try and lie their way into or out of every unpleasant situation.

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2019

Humans!!

Comment from Earl Corp

Excellent

I love the movie Topper. Probably not your best Ned and Pons installment. But it was better than the octo pusses at the post office. I'll bet if Ned and Pons went hunting it would be hilarious.

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2019

That will be next.

Comment from Miss Sherry

Excellent

LOL... and then some. Sometimes I feel like I'm infizzable, maybe I
caught it from Ned. I laughed so hard the cats hid under the bed. You are amazing. These absurd stories are beyond great!

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2019

Thanks, Sherry. My apologies to the meowers.

reply by Miss Sherry on 13-Feb-2019

They are such chickens!!

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

I love these two, they are so funny. Pon's is so good with Ned, so patient. This script is just how I can see some accidents playing out. But mostly, the good guy wins. Well done, Bill! :)) Sandra xxx

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2019

Thank you, Sandra.