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Conversation Around the Fruit Bowl

A smoothie tries it on, but she doesn't give a fig.

17 total reviews 
Comment from Chrissy710
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Ha Ha This made me laugh very clever and great use of fruity connections Well done and good luck ,Should score highly Cheers Christine

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2019

reply by the author on 13-Feb-2019
    I am really pleased you liked this fruit punnet. Thanks for your good wishes Chrissy
Comment from Nanny 6
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This is a funny play on words to give a fruit bowl character. One can almost jump into that bowl of fruit and join in the gossip. Lol. I really enjoyed the read. It put a smile on my face. Good luck in the contest!
Judy

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2019

reply by the author on 13-Feb-2019
    I'm glad my piece of silliness brightened your day. Thanks for your good wishes.
Comment from Monica L. Moraca
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Well done!! This is hysterical! As I read the prose I was vividly picturing the fruits acting out during this conversation. Thanks for the laugh and best of luck in the contest!
Monica

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2019

reply by the author on 13-Feb-2019
    Hi Monica... you and I must have similar imaginations. I was looking at my fruit bowl after i read the prompt and i reckon I heard them talking amongst themselves, like around an office water cooler!
Comment from Stephanie Launiu
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OMG, this deserves Six Stars! I'm only sorry I don't have them to give. This is the most adorable poem ever. How clever you are on such short notice with a writing prompt. I hope you win the contest. Your poem is the 'grapest' (greatest). I'm not as good at this as you.

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2019

reply by the author on 13-Feb-2019
    I am so pleased you dropped me a lime about my silly poem Stephanie, a virtual 6 is berry nice.
Comment from HealingMuse
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LOL

Some creative plays on words here, Mystery Author.

A great contest entry. Good luck in the voting booth!

Nothing here to suggest improving upon.

Thanks for sharing,

Jan

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 Comment Written 13-Feb-2019

reply by the author on 13-Feb-2019
    Thanks a bunch for the review. I'm glad you found it appeeling.
Comment from HeyJodieGirl
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This is a masterpiece, I'm a sucker for puns and you punned the hell out of this. It's silly and fun and I think that's what you were going for. Grape job! Get it? It's like the thing you did...

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2019

reply by the author on 13-Feb-2019
    I'm so glad you thought it was a step in the ripe direction as far as silliness goes.
    Thanks so much for the super 6!
Comment from Gloria ....
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I love all the fruity puns in this little parfait of a delight. Perfectly written and full of juicy gossip too.

I wish you great luck in the voting booth. :))

Gloria

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 Comment Written 12-Feb-2019

reply by the author on 13-Feb-2019
    Once I got into the swing of it I had to choose the zest ones to limit it to 50 words. I am berry pleased you liked it.