Comment from C. Gale Burnett

Excellent

This is so cute. I can imagine the pig flying to the end of the rainbow finding treasures galore and then flying back to report his findings :) I liked how you colored the font in the word 'rainbow'. Perfect title. This is a great contest entry :)

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019

Thank you so much for your great feedback! Best wishes, Debra :)

Comment from Joy Graham

Excellent

Dear Mystery Poet,

This was most unexpected, but I like it. Short but sweet, but you say everything that needs to be said lol! I wish there could be pots of gold at the end of the rainbow. I guess that's what lotteries are for?

Best wishes in the voting booth.

Joy xx

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2019

Thank you, Joy, for your lovely feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! :)

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

Hello there. You have written a really good verse for the Rainbow contest. I love the presentation and artwork that show that ... when pigs fly...we will find the treasure...LOL.. Well done and good luck.

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2019

Thank you for your kind feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! :)

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very cute and very well written poem you have written for the rainbow writing prompt. You used very good descriptive words and very appropriate art work of the flying pigs. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2019

Thank you so much, Teri, for your lovely feedback. Best wishes :)

Comment from HealingMuse

Excellent

Hi Mystery Author,

Thank you so much for the laugh. This is hysterically funny and a great contest entry!

Obviously, your selected image lends credence to your great verse.

Nothing amiss here to fix.

Best of luck in the voting booth - a liely winner here! :-)

Jan

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019

Hello Jan :)
Thank you so much for your kind and encouraging feedback and for your good luck wishes also! I appreciate both. Best wishes :)

Comment from KyColonel Randal

Excellent

Thank you for sharing. This is a poem which includes a rainbow, thus meeting the criteria for the contest you have entered. Your illustration pertains to your poem, and I like the black background and white text as well as the font you have chosen. Good luck with your contest entry!

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019

Thank you so much for your feedback and good luck wishes :) I appreciate both! Best wishes :)

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

An interesting, humorous 5-7-5 poem for the contest
Many have said they'll believe in the pot of gold
at the end of the rainbow when pigs fly
I guess in must be true
Well done
Good luck in the contest
RS

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019

Thank you for your feedback and good luck wishes, I appreciate both. Kind regards :)

Comment from Rhonda Skinner

Excellent

I really like this. A very clever mix of the pot of gold at the end of the rainbow story and when pigs fly impossibility. The only thing I would change is putting a comma where the period is and possibly lower case Oinked. Thanks for making me smile.

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019

Thank you so much, Rhonda, for your encouraging feedback and suggestions. I have edited as suggested! Thanks again, I appreciate it :) Best wishes

Comment from Cindy McIntyre

Excellent

What a joyful little flying pig. LOVE the colorful rainbow he can "fly" right over and gather his treasure in troves. :) Enjoyed your 5-7-5 presentation for this contest. Your humor is appreciated.

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019

Hi Cindy :) Thank you so much for your lovely feedback! I really appreciate it - glad to share a smile with you :)