Comment from Mistydawn

Excellent

What a sweet memory, the beginning of a happy Journey. You're poem is so warm, heartfelt, I could feel the love for your husband on every line. Thank you for sharing this memory with us.

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019

Thank you for your nice review.

Comment from Treischel

Excellent

A wonderful sentiment expressed here in this Acrostic poem that is hung upon your husband's name - Wayne. Even after all these years, he is in your heart. The love shines through.

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019

Thanks for your lovely review.

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

Thank you for sharing another of your touching photographs and more of your love for Wayne. I am glad you chose this special poem for Valentine's Day. Your "broken wings" metaphor is quite evocative. Best wishes in the contest- Joan

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019

Thank you for the understanding review.

Comment from Gail Denham

Excellent

Good job of acrostic. And lovely memories of that day. I was so scared, for some reason, could hard say "I Do." What do we know when we repeat those vows? Quickly we learn. Nearly 60 years later, I'm glad I managed to voice the "I do" - and I hope you're also glad. See there - your poem brings up memories - universal.

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019

Thanks for your lovely review.
Congratulations on the 60 years of marriage. Had my husband we would have been married 60 years on January 25th.

Comment from rhonnie69

Excellent

HELLO PATCELAW: I like your posting here in that it expresses love between people who love each other. This is the way our lives are supposed to be lived. Well done. This is good. You are good too. Thank you for sharing. You are appreciated. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2019

Thanks for your great understanding review.

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

Oh Patricia, what a wonderful story told...and I love your beautiful touching poem sweet girl....this is true love....the forever love...very nicely written...an wonderful picture...priceless...love you...Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2019

Thanks for your lovely and understanding review.

reply by l.raven on 13-Feb-2019

always soooo welcome sweet girl...love xxoo

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Exceptional

A very well-written heartfelt acrostic Valentine's poem with a perfect picture of a young couple just married and know their bond is made in heaven forever.

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2019

Thanks for your lovely and understanding review.

Comment from nancyjam

Excellent

This is a lovely Valenting poem entry. Sweet
sentiments in an Acrostic that conveys the power
of love to lift us up.
Nice imagery in the poem and lovely picture.
Nancy

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2019

Thanks for your lovely and understanding review.

Comment from Janice Canerdy

Excellent

This is a very sweet, sincere, moving acrostic poem about your feelings for the love of your life Wayne, whose presence has brought you so much joy.

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2019

Thanks for your lovely and understanding review.

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi, Pat

= Lovely dedication to your hubby, and good entry for the contest.
= Such a nice pix of you and Wayne on your wedding day.
= Hard to believe Tom and I celebrated 26 years. Seems like only yesterday we met.
= Good luck in the contest.

Cheers, J (*<*)

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2019

Thanks for your lovely and understanding review.