The Light of my Eyes
A love poem is forever21 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
Love you sweet poem of love and its power to transform. I have always said that my husband and I grew up in love. I see you have the magic of reading each other's thoughts.
All my best to you and in the contest.
Sal :+)
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
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Love you sweet poem of love and its power to transform. I have always said that my husband and I grew up in love. I see you have the magic of reading each other's thoughts.
All my best to you and in the contest.
Sal :+)
Comment Written 12-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
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Thank you Sally. I'm glad you felt it for love is far reaching. Hope Valentine was good for you. :)
Comment from Rickie1
Sweet poem and so true, at least for me. Isn't it wonderful how someone can complete your life. What would I be doing? What would my life be like without my wife? Lonely. Well done.
"The feelings are hot, my spelling, diction, and tense are not. But I write for your smile." You got it. I write the same way.
Rickie
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
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Sweet poem and so true, at least for me. Isn't it wonderful how someone can complete your life. What would I be doing? What would my life be like without my wife? Lonely. Well done.
"The feelings are hot, my spelling, diction, and tense are not. But I write for your smile." You got it. I write the same way.
Rickie
Comment Written 12-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
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Thank you Rickie. I would be nothing without the love of my wife. You got your lady some flowers right? :) Hope Valentine was good for you. :)
Comment from patcelaw
This is a great valentine poem and was a joy to read. I do wish for you and your wife a wonderful day. Happy Valentine's day. Patricia
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
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This is a great valentine poem and was a joy to read. I do wish for you and your wife a wonderful day. Happy Valentine's day. Patricia
Comment Written 12-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
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Thank you Patricia! I'm glad you felt it. Hope Valentine was good for you. :)
Comment from LisaMay
What a nicely expressed heartfelt poem. I love reading about people who have found their life partners, and how the love has changed bad ways for the better. Gratitude is a very good glue for relationships, and the love you share is very true.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
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What a nicely expressed heartfelt poem. I love reading about people who have found their life partners, and how the love has changed bad ways for the better. Gratitude is a very good glue for relationships, and the love you share is very true.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
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Thank you LisaMay. I'm glad you felt it. I just write what I feel. :) Hope Valentine was good for you. :)
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Writing emotions is, I think, the best topic for poetry. Sadly, Valentine must have forgotten where I live.
Comment from Sugarray77
I really liked this verse, Jose, and think you did a fantastic job in creating and presenting it. As an entry for the Valentines poem, it is perfect and a strong contender. Well done.
Melissa
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
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I really liked this verse, Jose, and think you did a fantastic job in creating and presenting it. As an entry for the Valentines poem, it is perfect and a strong contender. Well done.
Melissa
Comment Written 12-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
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Thank you Melissa! You too is honey sweet. :) Hope Valentine was good for you. :)
Comment from Rhonda Skinner
This is a lovely tribute to your wife and your relationship. Just noticed one spelling error: God has lead (led) us by the hand. Glad to hear you have your soulmate. I've found mine too.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
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This is a lovely tribute to your wife and your relationship. Just noticed one spelling error: God has lead (led) us by the hand. Glad to hear you have your soulmate. I've found mine too.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
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Than you Rhonda, for your comments and that typeo. :) Hope Valentine was good for you. :)
Comment from meeshu
such a fine love poem, P.W. that is a very unique rhyme structure, if it is original you should give it a name. it looks like it would be fun to work with. beautiful poem..........................meeshu
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
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such a fine love poem, P.W. that is a very unique rhyme structure, if it is original you should give it a name. it looks like it would be fun to work with. beautiful poem..........................meeshu
Comment Written 12-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
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Thank you meeshu. Let's call this a Free-rhyme-verse poem where you can rhyme and write free what is in your heart. :) Hope Valentine was good for you. :)
Comment from Raul1
It seems that she knows what he's thinking about. I like how you structured this poem. The man talks about his wife and how he treats her. I did enjoy it. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
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It seems that she knows what he's thinking about. I like how you structured this poem. The man talks about his wife and how he treats her. I did enjoy it. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 11-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
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thank you Raul. I'm glad you liked it. Hope Valentine was good for you. :)
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You're welcome
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written love poem about your wife. You used very good descriptive words and very nice imagery from the art work you chose. It is very nice what you said about wishing everyone finds a love that is true! Blessings, Teri
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This is a very well written love poem about your wife. You used very good descriptive words and very nice imagery from the art work you chose. It is very nice what you said about wishing everyone finds a love that is true! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 11-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
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Tank you Terri. I'm glad you felt it. :) Hope Valentine was good for you. :)
Comment from Debbie Pope
What a heartfelt valentine. This is so kind. This will make your wife so proud. She will love being called "honey sweet." She probably already knows the part about being able to read your mind.
I hope that both of you have a wonderful Valentine's Day. Thank you for sharing your poem.
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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
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What a heartfelt valentine. This is so kind. This will make your wife so proud. She will love being called "honey sweet." She probably already knows the part about being able to read your mind.
I hope that both of you have a wonderful Valentine's Day. Thank you for sharing your poem.
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Comment Written 11-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
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thank you Debbie. I'm glad you felt it and Hope Valentine was good for you. :)
