Eyes on You
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "Meltdown"Tommy tries to rescue their family.
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Comment from country ranch writer
Coh oh now it's in another turmoil for Tommy why can't he get a break I know he is wrong taking the drugs and turning it into money and all and now it really looks bad for him again
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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Coh oh now it's in another turmoil for Tommy why can't he get a break I know he is wrong taking the drugs and turning it into money and all and now it really looks bad for him again
Comment Written 12-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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Thank you for your great review, I'm glad you enjoyed it. You're right it was wrong of Tommy to sell those drugs, take all that money despite his reason. ALthough, it is a good one, saving someone's life.
Thank you again for your great review all your help, support and friendship, take care.
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Prayers for Tommy's wife
Comment from krprice
Great post.
Tommy continues to get himself in deeper and deeper. I do feel a bit sorry for him as he's only trying to get the money for his wife. However, he needs to find more legal ways of doing it.
Karlene
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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Great post.
Tommy continues to get himself in deeper and deeper. I do feel a bit sorry for him as he's only trying to get the money for his wife. However, he needs to find more legal ways of doing it.
Karlene
Comment Written 12-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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Thank you for your great review, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I have to agree with you Tommy should find more legal ways of getting the money. This one bad choice may alter the rest of his life.
Thank you again for your kind review all your help and support, take care.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Tommy should have worn gloves. I always carry disposable surgical gloves when I go out in case I see an empty mansion somewhere. And I wear rubber galoshes over my shoes so no one can match my shoes to footprints. Saves a lot of prison time, not to mention earns a lot more money. :)
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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Tommy should have worn gloves. I always carry disposable surgical gloves when I go out in case I see an empty mansion somewhere. And I wear rubber galoshes over my shoes so no one can match my shoes to footprints. Saves a lot of prison time, not to mention earns a lot more money. :)
Comment Written 11-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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lol, thank you for the fun review, you made my evening. You're right that would save a lot of prison time, lol. Guess Tommy should have talked to you before he began his spree. I know you're not faking your illness, but if someone were to pretended to be sick that would be a great coverup, someone the police wouldn't suspect, hmm.
Thank you again for all your help, support and friendship, it means a great deal to me, take care.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Mistydawn
I liked how Rachel was asking Tommy questions of what happened when he was in Mrs. Pearson home, it seemed that he was telling the truth until one of Tommy's neighbors, claimed he saw Tommy leave his house around four this morning. Said
he didn't return home until almost seven." Which doesn't match what Tommy was telling to Rachel, I say what a good way to get a readers attention; I know it did for me.
Gert
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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Hello Mistydawn
I liked how Rachel was asking Tommy questions of what happened when he was in Mrs. Pearson home, it seemed that he was telling the truth until one of Tommy's neighbors, claimed he saw Tommy leave his house around four this morning. Said
he didn't return home until almost seven." Which doesn't match what Tommy was telling to Rachel, I say what a good way to get a readers attention; I know it did for me.
Gert
Comment Written 11-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much for your fantastic review, you made my week. I'm so glad you enjoyed the story how Tommy was caught in a lie, or was he? lol.
Thank you so much for all your help, support and friendhip it means a great deal to me, take care.
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You are so welcome Mistydawn.
Gert
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Misty
= Oops, just when Tommy thinks he's good, it looks as if he could be in trouble again.
= Nice end hook with them checking out Tommy's pop can. Good chapter.
Cheers, J (*<*)
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
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Hi, Misty
= Oops, just when Tommy thinks he's good, it looks as if he could be in trouble again.
= Nice end hook with them checking out Tommy's pop can. Good chapter.
Cheers, J (*<*)
Comment Written 11-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
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Thank you for your great review I'm glad you enjoyed it. Just when Tommy thought he was clear too, poor guy just can't seem to get a break.
Thank you again for all your help, support and friendship, it's always greatly appreciated, take care.
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Wow, He almost got away with it. He was free and clear when a neighbor brings new evidence to-fore. Poor Tommy. He thinks he never gets a break, but I wonder if he deserves a break. He is a thief you know. Maybe he just makes the wrong choices? Well done. Dawn. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
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Wow, He almost got away with it. He was free and clear when a neighbor brings new evidence to-fore. Poor Tommy. He thinks he never gets a break, but I wonder if he deserves a break. He is a thief you know. Maybe he just makes the wrong choices? Well done. Dawn. Nancy:)
Comment Written 11-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
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Thank you for your great review. Yeah, that darn neighbor spoiled it for him. You're right he is a thief, although, he does commit crimes for the right reasons, survival.
Thank you again for your great review, all your help and support, take care.
Comment from royowen
Poor old Tommy, arrested and brought in for questioning, he tells his side of the story to Jeerry and Rachel, along with his alibi. They are inclined to believe him until they find out from a neighbour, he left at 4 am and returned at 7. They compare finger prints. Well done, good episode, not much luck for Tommy, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
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Poor old Tommy, arrested and brought in for questioning, he tells his side of the story to Jeerry and Rachel, along with his alibi. They are inclined to believe him until they find out from a neighbour, he left at 4 am and returned at 7. They compare finger prints. Well done, good episode, not much luck for Tommy, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 11-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
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Thank you for your great review. To quote a song from heehaw "if it weren't for bad luck I'd have no luck at all" That's Tommy for sure, poor guy. It seems his life is a bunch of unfortunate events.
Thank you again for all your help, support, encouragement, friendship,it means a lot to me, take care.
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Well done
Comment from KatyM
Found one typo:Te lady storms in and orders me out of her house."
Otherwise looks good! Boy, Tommy almost a way with stuff! Yikes! Guess the fingerprints from the window is his? I have gotten to a stand still when it comes to my book. Haven't written anything in probably a month. Waiting for James to get to back to work and maybe then I can get back to writing. sigh...
We are getting on each other's last nerve. lol
Happy Writing! katy
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
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Found one typo:Te lady storms in and orders me out of her house."
Otherwise looks good! Boy, Tommy almost a way with stuff! Yikes! Guess the fingerprints from the window is his? I have gotten to a stand still when it comes to my book. Haven't written anything in probably a month. Waiting for James to get to back to work and maybe then I can get back to writing. sigh...
We are getting on each other's last nerve. lol
Happy Writing! katy
Comment Written 11-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much for reading my chapter I'm glad you enjoyed it. Tommy almost got away with it. Darn neighbor, sticking his nose where it doesn't belong, lol.
Hopefully, James will get back to work soon it'll save your sanity and your book.
Thank you again for your great review all your help and support, take care.
Comment from Sugarray77
Oh, Misty, you are ratcheting it up again... higher and higher... Tommy is guilty, but I feel sorry for the guy... You are doing a very good job in writing this story. I am really enjoying reading it. Good write.
Melissa
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
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Oh, Misty, you are ratcheting it up again... higher and higher... Tommy is guilty, but I feel sorry for the guy... You are doing a very good job in writing this story. I am really enjoying reading it. Good write.
Melissa
Comment Written 11-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much for your great review and all your encouragement, I'm so glad you're enjoying it. The poor guy has had such a hard life it's difficult not to feel sorry for him.
Thank you again for all your help and support, take care.
