Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Hi Bill. Congratulations on your 33 years. Appreciating and being nice to each other is the key to longevity. Happy Valentine's Day and Anniversary. Marilyn

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019

Thanks, Marilyn. Kathy is my best friend and I am who she tolerates.

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hi Bill, I'm happy for you and your wife still going strong after so many years. I just divorced my second husband earlier this year. A decision well taken. I couldn't be happier, but I'm always glad when I come across happy unions. So, a happy Valentine to you and your wife. Ulla:))

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019

Thanks, Ulla. I?ve been married twice too. Ten years to the first and now thirty-three to Kathy.

reply by Ulla on 12-Feb-2019

Bless you both :)

Comment from tbacha58

Excellent

You are so right by writing your thoughts about Valentines Day, as I also believe exactly like you. Either Love exists into marriage or not. Titles do not force someone to love because everyone on that same day is writing yes I love you or not. Terry xoxo

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019

Thanks, Terry

Comment from djsaxon

Good

Nice acrostic tribute but I reckon you could have sacrificed flow for clarity and Capitalised each new line. Also reduced the font size so that ANNIVERSARY fell within the parameters. Sorry about the four. Cheers - DJ

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 Comment Written 12-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019

Looks good on this end. Happy day.

Comment from WryWriter

Excellent

An usual Valentine's Day poem making a point. You get back what you put in to a relationship. The artwork chosen for this theme is just as unusual. It draws you in and says, "stare at me." LOL! Good luck in the contest!

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019

Thanks, WW

Comment from meeshu

Excellent

This is a very good piece, consistent rhymes, good phrasing with great rhythm. heartfelt and passionate. happy V-Day, Bill...................meeshu

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019

Hanks, meeshu

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Congratulations on the thirty-three years, Bill and Kathy! It's a beautiful thing when people can commit and work on life together. Blessings to you of many more!

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019

Thank you, lyenochka.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Bill, This is a very beautiful and well written poem for the Valentine Poem contest. Congratulations of being together for 33 years. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings Teri

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019

Thanks, Teri

Comment from nancy_e_davis

Excellent

Congratulations, that is quit a feat in this day and age Bill. This younger generation seem to think they can shop around before they commit. No way will they ever know what commitment really means. Poem well done. Good luck. Nancy:)

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019

Thanks, Nancy

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

What a lovely thought. this is sure to win you favor! Thirty-three years is quite a history--congratulations. You're expressing appreciation for those 33 years, and that's a good, solid record. Excellent rhyme and flow, and have a great Valentine's Day. judi

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019

Thanks, Judi

reply by judiverse on 11-Feb-2019

You're very welcome. judi