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Rhyming Quatrains32 total reviews
Comment from Kathleen Washnis
Melissa, this is just like what we spoke about in the recent past, feeding the chickadees!! I had to give you an extra star for this one as it was so well written and brings back sweet memories of feeding these precious sweethearts. I took my gloves off and let them land right on my hand! I like how you inform the chickadee to wear his cape and cap as it looks like he does. Thanks for sharing this! I know you already earned an All Time Best but I wanted to do my part as well.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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Melissa, this is just like what we spoke about in the recent past, feeding the chickadees!! I had to give you an extra star for this one as it was so well written and brings back sweet memories of feeding these precious sweethearts. I took my gloves off and let them land right on my hand! I like how you inform the chickadee to wear his cape and cap as it looks like he does. Thanks for sharing this! I know you already earned an All Time Best but I wanted to do my part as well.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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Hello, Kathleen. I am in awe that they actually perched on your finger. I have never had one on my skin before. I am grateful for the wonderful review and your support!! Thank you.
Melissa
Comment from Joanna S. Blue
This is so charming and the picture is a perfect match. I especially like the first
stanza addressing how they both will be dressed for the feast. The rhyme is very
skillful and helps to set the cheerful tone.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2019
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This is so charming and the picture is a perfect match. I especially like the first
stanza addressing how they both will be dressed for the feast. The rhyme is very
skillful and helps to set the cheerful tone.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2019
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Thanks... I love chickadees and wanted to write a verse for them. Much appreciated, Joanna!
Melissa
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about feeding the chickadee. They become very tamed when we feed them from our hand or in our gardens with a bird feeder.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2019
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A very well-written poem about feeding the chickadee. They become very tamed when we feed them from our hand or in our gardens with a bird feeder.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2019
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Thank you very much, Sandra.
Melissa
Comment from nancyjam
Your sweet poem reminds me of the finches that come to the feeder
I have handing from a tree. Wish I could get this close to them,
Your quatrains are rhymed and metered well and convey the scene well.
The picture adds to the enjoyment as well.
Nancy
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2019
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Your sweet poem reminds me of the finches that come to the feeder
I have handing from a tree. Wish I could get this close to them,
Your quatrains are rhymed and metered well and convey the scene well.
The picture adds to the enjoyment as well.
Nancy
Comment Written 12-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2019
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Thanks for the lovely review, Nancy!
Melissa
Comment from poetwatch
The magic of your words should make that chickadee eat right off your hand, Melissa. You do wonders with a rhyme. ;) Like I've told you before... You're good.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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The magic of your words should make that chickadee eat right off your hand, Melissa. You do wonders with a rhyme. ;) Like I've told you before... You're good.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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Thanks so very much!!! You always encourage me.
Melissa
Comment from Susanjohn
I would say very brave and very cute!! Loving this little birdie poem!! This is simply just a sweet write.. Puts a smile on the face :-)))) well done.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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I would say very brave and very cute!! Loving this little birdie poem!! This is simply just a sweet write.. Puts a smile on the face :-)))) well done.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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I am delighted that you like my little chickadee verse. Thank you, Susan.
Melissa
Comment from Irish Rain
Oh, just so very sweet.
We put out sunflower seeds each day, and a mix....but the squirrels get the sunflower seeds.
That's ok, they gotta eat too.
Love the poem and pretty picture,
Blessings...
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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Oh, just so very sweet.
We put out sunflower seeds each day, and a mix....but the squirrels get the sunflower seeds.
That's ok, they gotta eat too.
Love the poem and pretty picture,
Blessings...
Comment Written 11-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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Hey there, Judy. I am glad you enjoyed this little birdie verse. I do love little chickadees!!
Melissa
Comment from meeshu
you have a very intimate relationship with your feathered friends. so do I, we are both going to need a lot of therapy. great write, Melissa.......................meeshu
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
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you have a very intimate relationship with your feathered friends. so do I, we are both going to need a lot of therapy. great write, Melissa.......................meeshu
Comment Written 11-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
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Haha... You are too funny. I do love watching the birds... that is my therapy. :)
Melissa
Comment from Janet Foor
This is adorable poem Melissa. A sweet picture to accompany your well written piece.
We feed the birds and chickadees are one of my favorites.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
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This is adorable poem Melissa. A sweet picture to accompany your well written piece.
We feed the birds and chickadees are one of my favorites.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 11-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
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Hey, Janet. Thank you so much... I do love the little chickadees!!
Melissa
Comment from Rachelle Allen
I love this poem, and I love the picture that accompanies it. We have a park near our house with a spot, Birdsong Trail, where visitors can hold seeds on their outstretched hand, and chickadees will alight and feast! This poem should be on a plaque at the start of this place!! Everyone would love it! Thank you for this day-brightener, Sugarray!
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
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I love this poem, and I love the picture that accompanies it. We have a park near our house with a spot, Birdsong Trail, where visitors can hold seeds on their outstretched hand, and chickadees will alight and feast! This poem should be on a plaque at the start of this place!! Everyone would love it! Thank you for this day-brightener, Sugarray!
Comment Written 11-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
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I am delighted you like it, Rachelle. Thank you.
Melissa
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You have such a knack with rhyme and meter!
