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Comment from kiwijenny
I love the little chickadee...and their chirrup chicka dee dee dee
I love this poem...and you are equally brave to be outside in bitter cold..lol
This is precious. You captured a moment and is the photo one you took?
God bless
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2019
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I love the little chickadee...and their chirrup chicka dee dee dee
I love this poem...and you are equally brave to be outside in bitter cold..lol
This is precious. You captured a moment and is the photo one you took?
God bless
Comment Written 10-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2019
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Hi Jenny. Thanks for the lovely comments. I really like chickadees and just had to write a verse about them. I appreciate your read and review!!
Melissa
Comment from Joan E.
I enjoyed your conversation with the chickadee in these rhymed quatrains. A few months ago, my husband put a bird feeder on our deck, but it took until the recent cold of winter for the birds to be drawn to it. Now, we have daily visits from "brave" chickadees and blue jays, who, by the way, do not mingle! Smiles- Joan
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2019
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I enjoyed your conversation with the chickadee in these rhymed quatrains. A few months ago, my husband put a bird feeder on our deck, but it took until the recent cold of winter for the birds to be drawn to it. Now, we have daily visits from "brave" chickadees and blue jays, who, by the way, do not mingle! Smiles- Joan
Comment Written 10-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2019
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Hi Joan.... a fellow birdwatcher!! I love it. I like chickadees in their little black caps and I wanted to showcase them in a verse. I am delighted that you liked it.
All the best,
Melissa
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Yes, the "cape and cap" of the chickadee was gorgeously showcased and reinforced by your great photograph. In fact, I am looking at two of the creatures nibbling seeds on my deck right now--they are braving the rain! Cheers- Joan
Comment from Gloria ....
This is just wonderful Melissa. I love birds and this is a finely rhymed and metred poem about the best ever, sharing.
Keep up the superb poetry. :))
Gloria
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2019
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This is just wonderful Melissa. I love birds and this is a finely rhymed and metred poem about the best ever, sharing.
Keep up the superb poetry. :))
Gloria
Comment Written 10-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2019
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Thank you very much, Gloria. I do love the little chickadees and thought I would pen something about them. Have a great evening.
Melissa
Comment from Stephanie Launiu
The photo is a perfect partner to this cute little poem. Your rhyming quatrains are precious to describe a little bird feeding out of the hand of a human. Well done!
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2019
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The photo is a perfect partner to this cute little poem. Your rhyming quatrains are precious to describe a little bird feeding out of the hand of a human. Well done!
Comment Written 10-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2019
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Thank you so very much, Stephanie. I am grateful for your read and review!!
Melissa
Comment from Cass Carlton
I love birds. Anything from a chook in the coop to a hawk flying high. And I love to feed them. This sweet little creature is ready for breakfast. Sunflower seeds are so warming for birds as a nourishing food. They are so trusting when they know you won't hurt them. I have had sparrows come and flit around my head when I had crumbs for them. Do you have Willy Wagtails? They are dear little black and white birds that become so trusting they will do as this one has and sit on your hand to take food. This poem is delightful. Written by a bird lover I am sure. Telling of a moment spent in Nature during the cold of winter well done Cass
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2019
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I love birds. Anything from a chook in the coop to a hawk flying high. And I love to feed them. This sweet little creature is ready for breakfast. Sunflower seeds are so warming for birds as a nourishing food. They are so trusting when they know you won't hurt them. I have had sparrows come and flit around my head when I had crumbs for them. Do you have Willy Wagtails? They are dear little black and white birds that become so trusting they will do as this one has and sit on your hand to take food. This poem is delightful. Written by a bird lover I am sure. Telling of a moment spent in Nature during the cold of winter well done Cass
Comment Written 10-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2019
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I do love birds, Cass... I have downloaded the Cornell University app called Merlin and I use it to identify the birds here in central Virginia. I am delighted to share this love of nature with you too!! Thanks so much for the wonderful review.
Melissa
Comment from judiverse
This is so cute, and I love the artwork. It doesn't take much to get a bird to eat some food. They overcome any fear of a human if there's a chance to get some sunflower seeds. Charming poem, and excellent rhyme. judi
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2019
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This is so cute, and I love the artwork. It doesn't take much to get a bird to eat some food. They overcome any fear of a human if there's a chance to get some sunflower seeds. Charming poem, and excellent rhyme. judi
Comment Written 10-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2019
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Thank you so very much, my friend! I am grateful for your read and review, Judi. I love these little birds and like to write about them!!
Melissa
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You're very welcome. judi
Comment from l.raven
Hi Melissa, this is just precious my sweet friend...
I used to feed the squirrel's like this...but peanuts...
what beautiful gifts God has given us...nature...very nicely written sweet girl...and your picture is stunning...love you poem...love you...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2019
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Hi Melissa, this is just precious my sweet friend...
I used to feed the squirrel's like this...but peanuts...
what beautiful gifts God has given us...nature...very nicely written sweet girl...and your picture is stunning...love you poem...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 10-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2019
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Hi, Linda. I love nature too and I really like birds. I have an app from Cornell called Merlin that helps me to identify them and their songs.... Thank you, dear friend, for the wonderful review!!
Melissa
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you are always so welcome sweet girl...heart of gold...love xxoo
Comment from 24chas
This was a good read, sugarray77. Spring fever must really be starting. This was a pleasant piece and the artwork really enhanced it. Nice job and keep up the good writing.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2019
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This was a good read, sugarray77. Spring fever must really be starting. This was a pleasant piece and the artwork really enhanced it. Nice job and keep up the good writing.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2019
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Thank you so very much, 24chas. I am grateful for your read and review!!
Melissa
Comment from country ranch writer
Beautiful birds are a delight they love to eat their seeds
beautiful birds to enjoy and watch them eat oh beautiful chickadees.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2019
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Beautiful birds are a delight they love to eat their seeds
beautiful birds to enjoy and watch them eat oh beautiful chickadees.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2019
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Thank you so very much. I am grateful for your read and review!!
Melissa
Comment from Gert sherwood
Smiles Sugarray77
I love your Rhyming Quatrains poem about you tempting the chickadees to feast from a bird fender and slowly attract them to eat from you hand
Smiles Gert
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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2019
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Smiles Sugarray77
I love your Rhyming Quatrains poem about you tempting the chickadees to feast from a bird fender and slowly attract them to eat from you hand
Smiles Gert
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Comment Written 10-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2019
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Thank you so very much, Gert. I am grateful for your read and review!! I really like the chickadees and wanted to write about them. Have a lovely evening.
Melissa
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You are welcome Sugarray77
I hope you read my free style poem
Why is it?
Thank you Gert
