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Rhyming Quatrains32 total reviews
Comment from Mistydawn
This is a cute little poem, a fun read. We have these cute little birds visit our feeder all the time, but they aren't as brave as that, they'll fly off if I open the curtain to fast, or notice me in the window.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
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This is a cute little poem, a fun read. We have these cute little birds visit our feeder all the time, but they aren't as brave as that, they'll fly off if I open the curtain to fast, or notice me in the window.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
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I love chickadees and can see them around our yard... I wanted to write a verse to showcase how cute they are!! Thanks a bunch!!
Melissa
Comment from Ulla
Hi melissa, this is just too sweet. I loved your poem and it's sentiment. To feed the birds is such a feat and how brave they are. Your poem has great rhythm and imagery. All the best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
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Hi melissa, this is just too sweet. I loved your poem and it's sentiment. To feed the birds is such a feat and how brave they are. Your poem has great rhythm and imagery. All the best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 11-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
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Hi, Ulla. Thank you very much for the great review. I am glad you enjoyed this verse... I love chickadees!!
Melissa
Comment from Y. M. Roger
As usual, Melissa, your words are perfect for your mood here -- light yet flowing and airy so that the reader feels as the author...thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
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As usual, Melissa, your words are perfect for your mood here -- light yet flowing and airy so that the reader feels as the author...thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 11-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
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I am really glad you like this little chickadee verse. They are one of my favorite birds. Thank you much, Yvette.
Melissa
Comment from June Sargent
This is adorable, Melissa! Wish I could get to feed birds out of my hand. The artwork is eye catching with the bright blue gloves offering the seeds and the cute little bird cocking his head. Should I, shouldn't I? Oh, I'll go for it...well done.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
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This is adorable, Melissa! Wish I could get to feed birds out of my hand. The artwork is eye catching with the bright blue gloves offering the seeds and the cute little bird cocking his head. Should I, shouldn't I? Oh, I'll go for it...well done.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
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Haha, love your take on this. I am delighted that you enjoyed it with me, June. Thanks so much.
Melissa
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi, Melissa,
The picture is darling, but you outdid it with the power of your rhymes. The sing-song rhythm of this piece works well - I could see it as a children's rhyme. Thank you for sharing,
~patty~
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
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Hi, Melissa,
The picture is darling, but you outdid it with the power of your rhymes. The sing-song rhythm of this piece works well - I could see it as a children's rhyme. Thank you for sharing,
~patty~
Comment Written 11-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
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Hi Patty.... thank you very much for the wonderful review. I am delighted that you enjoyed it!! I adore chickadees and wanted to write about them. Hugs.
Melissa
Comment from CD Richards
There is something very exhilarating when a tiny wild creature is willing to put their trust in us like that. It makes us (well, me at least) feel a little less unworthy to be considered part of the animal kingdom. A most delightful picture, and a lovely poem with excellent rhyme and meter. Good job, Melissa.
Craig
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
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There is something very exhilarating when a tiny wild creature is willing to put their trust in us like that. It makes us (well, me at least) feel a little less unworthy to be considered part of the animal kingdom. A most delightful picture, and a lovely poem with excellent rhyme and meter. Good job, Melissa.
Craig
Comment Written 11-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
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Thanks so much, Craig. I just love chickadees and wanted to showcase them in a verse. I am delighted you like it and reviewed.
Have a great day!
Melissa
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a sweetly rhymed poem about this cute little bird, I notice you have used commas here but no fullstops or 'periods' as you guys call them? I remember getting kicked into line by my editor when I first published because I didn't use punctuation properly. This of course does not detract from your poem. Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
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This is a sweetly rhymed poem about this cute little bird, I notice you have used commas here but no fullstops or 'periods' as you guys call them? I remember getting kicked into line by my editor when I first published because I didn't use punctuation properly. This of course does not detract from your poem. Love Dolly x
Comment Written 11-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
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Thanks so much, Dolly. I just love chickadees and wanted to showcase them in a verse. I am delighted you like it and reviewed. I will relook the punctuation. Much appreciated.
Have a great day!
Melissa
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If you are considering publishing your poetry Melissa, you should punctuate your work, I can?t put too finer point on it because your meaning will improve and it will give your poetry more professionalism, love Dolly x
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Thank you very much, Dolly. I really do think you are right and I should go back and look at all of my poetry. But, I am overwhelmed by that thought. LOL. Better in the future... I hope..
Melissa
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I only go back over my work if it is to be published in a book, then you can punctuate it then x x x
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Comment from Green_Jello
What sweet little poem and I love the imagery you provide with telling the bird to wear his Cape and cap because that is indeed what it looks like! Your rhyme and rhythm are smooth making this a pleasure to read. Well done, thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
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What sweet little poem and I love the imagery you provide with telling the bird to wear his Cape and cap because that is indeed what it looks like! Your rhyme and rhythm are smooth making this a pleasure to read. Well done, thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 11-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
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Thanks so much, Green Jello. I just love chickadees and wanted to showcase them in a verse. I am delighted you like it and reviewed.
Have a great day!
Melissa
Comment from LovnPeace
my, you are very brave--- The last line I seemed to stumble a bit line and it seemed to break the good flow. Lovely poem and picture. I hope you don't mind, but I would replace the word (very) with the word SO, It flows better, Just a suggestion. Blessings, Barbara
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
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my, you are very brave--- The last line I seemed to stumble a bit line and it seemed to break the good flow. Lovely poem and picture. I hope you don't mind, but I would replace the word (very) with the word SO, It flows better, Just a suggestion. Blessings, Barbara
Comment Written 10-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
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Thanks for your suggestion, Barbara. I appreciate it and the review. I will go look again and see what you refer to. Much appreciated, my friend.
Melissa
Comment from lyenochka
That is a really brave bird! I guess they figure out who has the food and that he or she can be trusted. Lovely rhyming quatrains that describe this picture well.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
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That is a really brave bird! I guess they figure out who has the food and that he or she can be trusted. Lovely rhyming quatrains that describe this picture well.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
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Thanks so much, Helen. I just love chickadees and wanted to showcase them in a verse. I am delighted you like it and reviewed.
Have a great day!
Melissa
