Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

Silently praying as we walked life's track.
Together finally freedom is ours for you are mine and I am yours,
Freedom to love with one's whole heart is true love
God bless

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019

thans for taing time review...much appreciated

Comment from HealingMuse

Excellent

Hi Sweet,

What a delightful Valentine poem! A great contest entry, for sure.

I like that you sort of compare and contrast previous loves with "the one."

Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.

Jan

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019

thanks so much for your kind review and muchly appreciated

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

This is a beautiful and unique offering for this contest -- and such a wonderful reassurance to folks that, no matter your disposition or special ways, there is someone out there for you! ;);) A few catches below - employ or ignore as you like. Thank you for sharing! ;)

great divine, distance ----> great divide, distance

Together finally freedom is ours for you ---> Together, finally, freedom is ours, for you

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019

thanks for taking time to review ..and yes have decided to employ 'divide' thanking you ...love an honest pick up.....much appreciated

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

Welcome back--I was glad to see your name pop up on my screen along with your timely poem. I admired your rhymes and reverberating love echoed in the picture as well. Your hyperbole about waiting and your "track" metaphor were very effective also. Best wishes in the Valentine Poem competition- Joan

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2019

Hi Joan..thank you..been a few years away now but good to be back...thank you for your review and comments..always appreciated...and taken on board

Comment from Christine C Autry

Excellent

This was so good. I truly enjoyed reading it. So much love in your writing. I thought you did wonderful on this poem. Your artwork was so good too. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2019

thank you for taking time to review and your comments and well wishes too..much appreciated

reply by Christine C Autry on 10-Feb-2019

You are welcome.

reply by Christine C Autry on 10-Feb-2019

You are welcome.

Comment from ajay53

Excellent

You have a beautifully worded love poem. But, on next to last line, you have quote marks instead of an apostrophe on the word life"s....should be life's. Other than that, wonderful poem. I hope you can edit this before the contest is judged.

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2019

Hi ..thank you for your thoughtful review and I will fix that grammer......much appreciated