St Louis
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Comment from royowen
I think you've cleverly created a marvellous thing, with a female private eye, as a major character, of this will be a fascinating story, with your usual excellent back story to the story, well done, blessings, Roy
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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2019
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I think you've cleverly created a marvellous thing, with a female private eye, as a major character, of this will be a fascinating story, with your usual excellent back story to the story, well done, blessings, Roy
Typo : There's no way that lo(o)ser.2: "I'm not going back until (my) there's justice...
Comment Written 10-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2019
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Thank you for the catches. I have made the corrections. I appreciate the help.
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Most welcome Barbara.
Comment from 24chas
Good start, Barbara Wilkey. I'm already getting into it. Like the dialogue and the character development already. Only one small nit: Hell No! (no). I can't wait for the next chapter.
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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2019
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Good start, Barbara Wilkey. I'm already getting into it. Like the dialogue and the character development already. Only one small nit: Hell No! (no). I can't wait for the next chapter.
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Comment Written 10-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2019
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Thank you for the catch. I made the correction. I appreciate the help.
