Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Very clever! I enjoyed reading about this use of the "parapluie" as a pretty drink decoration. The last line is perfect - "epicurean joy." Hope you do well in the contest!

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019

Thanks for a superb reveiw zanya

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This umbrella-oriented 6-8-6, Parasol Pleasure, has the syllables in the right place and finds a way to enjoy a rainy day.

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019

Thanks for reading zanya

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

This is such a wonderful and imaginative offering for the contest -- love it!! ;) Thank you so very much for contributing! ;) ;) Have a wonderful evening! ;) Y.M.

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019

And thanks for those encouraging words zanya

Comment from ajay53

Exceptional

This is a very well written poem with a wonderful illustration. I wish you luck in the contest. I hadn't had a drink in so long I forgot they sometimes come with little umbrellas. Good jub.

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019

And thanks again for those twinkling stars ! zanya

Comment from RodG

Excellent

This is a light-hearted poem on a dreary day. You definitely make me wish I was in the Caribbean sipping this "epicurian joy." The P-alliteration adds to your playful TONE. Fun! Rod

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019

Love it ! Zanya