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Comment from Janetsue
It took me a moment to understand that the acrostic part is representing WWMG - Walk with My God. To be a true acrostic, however, the first letters of the sentences should spell out an actual word. --- Your message, however, is strong and right on target. --- For what you have explained, you have done very well although the form needs to be given another name, such as Phrase-Initial Poetry.
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It took me a moment to understand that the acrostic part is representing WWMG - Walk with My God. To be a true acrostic, however, the first letters of the sentences should spell out an actual word. --- Your message, however, is strong and right on target. --- For what you have explained, you have done very well although the form needs to be given another name, such as Phrase-Initial Poetry.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2020
Comment from Alchera
We will turn to him faster than before when our time comes closer to the ends as possibly happens soon! Each one of us will try our best to return and take the right way to be accepted by His glorious divine grace. Well throughout and written. Thanks for sharing.
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We will turn to him faster than before when our time comes closer to the ends as possibly happens soon! Each one of us will try our best to return and take the right way to be accepted by His glorious divine grace. Well throughout and written. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2020
Comment from Allieas
I think it's a beautiful thing to be so inspired by your faith.
I found this line to be particularly thought-provoking:
Try to know what are man's limitations, responsibilities, duties for an immortal living
Honestly learn why God invites man to Heaven and give him back his real home there
Thank you for sharing this!
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I think it's a beautiful thing to be so inspired by your faith.
I found this line to be particularly thought-provoking:
Try to know what are man's limitations, responsibilities, duties for an immortal living
Honestly learn why God invites man to Heaven and give him back his real home there
Thank you for sharing this!
Comment Written 07-Apr-2020
Comment from RShipp
So many kindnesses God has bestowed on us.
May you continue to walk and learn His ways.
Blessings to you and stay safe.
I enjoyed your first ever Free Verse Acrostic Poetry in your own style
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So many kindnesses God has bestowed on us.
May you continue to walk and learn His ways.
Blessings to you and stay safe.
I enjoyed your first ever Free Verse Acrostic Poetry in your own style
Comment Written 07-Apr-2020
Comment from Frank Jauregui
Blessings and thank you for sharing your wonderful piece, Walk With God. Acts 17:28 says, "For in him we live, and move, and have our being;" We can enjoy walking with God here on earth and the here after. The first step comes by knowing him as our Lord and Savior. God Bless you.
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Blessings and thank you for sharing your wonderful piece, Walk With God. Acts 17:28 says, "For in him we live, and move, and have our being;" We can enjoy walking with God here on earth and the here after. The first step comes by knowing him as our Lord and Savior. God Bless you.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2020
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
The creation of your acoustic poem is very nice. I love reading about God and what He has done for us. God is God and He is the one and only God. It would be difficult to live without His love.
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The creation of your acoustic poem is very nice. I love reading about God and what He has done for us. God is God and He is the one and only God. It would be difficult to live without His love.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2020
Comment from forestport12
I can imagine you might get jabs for the spiritual poetry, but I understand and can identify with the words that you share, esp. from the one who is the way, the truth, and life. Another memorable one.
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I can imagine you might get jabs for the spiritual poetry, but I understand and can identify with the words that you share, esp. from the one who is the way, the truth, and life. Another memorable one.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2020
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Walk with My God
by Alcreator Litt Dear
Hello my friend
Another interfaith poem about God... Interesting. I had a hard time following the meaning of the poem. It kind of goes on and on about the same things. May try to summarize your thoughts. Sometimes less is better.
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Walk with My God
by Alcreator Litt Dear
Hello my friend
Another interfaith poem about God... Interesting. I had a hard time following the meaning of the poem. It kind of goes on and on about the same things. May try to summarize your thoughts. Sometimes less is better.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2020
Comment from Ross E Silke
Ya, go God!! You're really enthused about God stuff, it's good! We need faith especially now in these times as God is calling us all to come back to Him. It's great to know God and then worship Him in our giftings, writing, art, and music. Everything we do should be an act of worship onto God. I know the church has once said so heavenly minded we are of no earthly good, but I also heard it said that we need to be heavenly minded to be any good at all, lol. lol. I laugh when I reread that. Those that oppose the gospel and the true Christian faith in writing well they are serving the other camp per say. I admire your courage to write for God and be at the top. Well done! I'm reminded of the verse "Well done, good and faithful servant." --Take it to heart today. God bless! Continue to stay safe.
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Ya, go God!! You're really enthused about God stuff, it's good! We need faith especially now in these times as God is calling us all to come back to Him. It's great to know God and then worship Him in our giftings, writing, art, and music. Everything we do should be an act of worship onto God. I know the church has once said so heavenly minded we are of no earthly good, but I also heard it said that we need to be heavenly minded to be any good at all, lol. lol. I laugh when I reread that. Those that oppose the gospel and the true Christian faith in writing well they are serving the other camp per say. I admire your courage to write for God and be at the top. Well done! I'm reminded of the verse "Well done, good and faithful servant." --Take it to heart today. God bless! Continue to stay safe.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2020
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello - a well written faith poem written in acrostic form. An interesting read - one little point. Would not 'immortal living' in line six be 'immortal life'? Just a small point in an otherwise good poem. Regards Dorothy.
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Hello - a well written faith poem written in acrostic form. An interesting read - one little point. Would not 'immortal living' in line six be 'immortal life'? Just a small point in an otherwise good poem. Regards Dorothy.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2019
