Comment from 24chas

Excellent

The was a good read, Alcreator Litt Dear. Nice job sticking with the acrostic and getting your message through. It was well written. Good job and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2019

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

I like this free verse acrostic....acrostic is tough enough to make flow if you also must follow a rhyme scheme. As far as I am concerned free is the way to go. And it does flow.
The message is powerful and so needed .
Well done.
God bless

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2019

Comment from pome lover

Excellent

a lovely and loving poem with beautiful thoughts and sincere expressions of true belief.
Inspiring.
I believe you said to walk with God and come back and tell about things. How, sir, are we to do that? Maybe I misunderstood you.
Otherwise I think it is a beautiful piece. very good.
Katharine - pome lover

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2019

Thank you for expressing your thoughts with a doubtful question. God can do anything, anywhere, anyway, and act anything even man cannot think, because man is man and God is God, what God can do we cannot do.


Yes, you have misunderstood my words.


When you have strong, true, deep and hearty faith in God, you can understand and appreciate that God can do anything, moreover, you know, God is Almighty, God is Omniscient, if God wants, He can give you a chance to have a walk with Him and you can talk with Him, and when you go on walking with Him and talk with Him, you may learn more about what is living, and more and more about God's Creations, and you may have new words and lessons from Him. The poem speaks about the same.



Please do not misunderstand me and misinterpret my thoughts or words. You are wise. Hope, now you understand how you too can do that. Faith in God can help you make doing anything within your power. That is why when God chose you to do something, everything is possible, even that you cannot think of.

You are weak in English and you have not read the poem carefully. Your words prove it. Anyway, this is in terms of your words you expressed for reviewing my poem, and it is not stated generalized in term of appreciation.


I do not believe I wish to walk and talk with God.


Where have you read this in the poem?


Which line or lines tell you about this?


You have been invited by God to have a walk and talk with Him.


Please re-read the poem and it will make you clear.



There is no single word in the poem that expresses I am to go on walking and talking with God.


Where in the poem I have written that I will walk and talk with God?


You are just misinterpreting, please re-read the poem, it will be clear and you cannot change the truths.


Misinterpreting the truths is always condemned by anyone and even by God.



One who is destined, if he goes on walking and talking with God, and when he will return on the earth, he will explain new words from God, if he learns, if he cares to learn, and if he really learns from God, and practice living as per God's words and lessons and we will follow him, learn him and appreciate him how to live as per God's words and on his return from God to earth on this world, we will learn and practice righteous and man's immortal living, because on return from God the man will work as a guide to living to us, or he will live as guide to them, you and me and all others will know what is righteous living.


Hope, you know how wrongly you have read my words in the poem.


Now, you know about your misinterpretation.


It is not bad if we do not understand any word but it is not wise to misunderstand a word (as a result of one's poor knowledge in the language, as people say, or for one's poor power of thoughts or as a result of one's inability to appreciate the wisdom in a word or thought).


And it is never good to live without faith in God and raise unnecessary question or indulge mind to raise insignificant question (I think, as wise people say, it happens when someone does not truly have strong, deep, hearty and true faith in God).


Please do not get hurt or feel hurt, I am not writing that you have no faith in God, but truly, you have no strong or deep faith in God, and please do not misunderstand me that I am calling you a fool or unwise, you are wise that I have already mentioned, again, please do not misunderstand me that I am telling you have no knowledge in the language, you have knowledge in the language but you have proved you have poor level of appreciation in the language in understanding my poem (I have given examples enough), and please do not take in personally and feel hurt at my words, I have just worded the facts, of course, I do not assume, I hope I have explained enough.


Thanking you once again for writing an honest review I do appreciate.


With best of luck and the best respects


Wish you every success in your chosen goal


Sincerely yours


Alcreator Litt Dear

reply by pome lover on 10-Feb-2019

I am sorry I upset you. I was merely asking you a question about something I did not understand.
I don't believe God would have chastised me as you have.
Katharine - pome lover

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

Hi Al, I have to tell you...I am not good at free verse...but I have tried a few of them...I have always liked rhythm and rhyme...and I love your free verse poem...your words are so very true...it is so important to walk with God...to show Him the love in your heart...very well written...I will let some of the better free verse writers do any correction...for me...I love it...and I love the picture for many reasons...love Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2019

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Hello there,

Your first free verse acrostic poem is interesting.

Those of us who know Him and walk with Him daily can relate to your words.

Keep Writing,

~Mustang Patty~

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2019

Comment from beencounter

Excellent

Your poem flows such that if you hadn't mentioned it was an acrostic, I probably wouldn't have noticed. And by the way, I liked the repetition of words; they lend a quiet rhythm to the piece.

The following is given in the spirit of helpfulness and not to harm...

The line that starts with Honestly learn seems to have a tense issue. God invites man and gives him back his real home...gives versus give.

I hope the above is helpful.

Kind regards,

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 Comment Written 10-Feb-2019

Comment from ajay53

Good

Excellent effort at the acrostic style. This is not easy even with simpler subject matter. Very good illustration. I will look for more of your poetic efforts.

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 Comment Written 10-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2019

Thank you for showing your wisdom in appreciation of poetry in your words