God Speaks
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Comment from MARIANNE GI
Great Amazing Excellent I loved it. I wish I could walk with God and answer so many questions...I have made this thought in my brain even before I read your work, and my only bad thought was "and what if he allows me to ask only one question..what would that be"? I think you inspired me to write something.Congratulations, that was excellent
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Great Amazing Excellent I loved it. I wish I could walk with God and answer so many questions...I have made this thought in my brain even before I read your work, and my only bad thought was "and what if he allows me to ask only one question..what would that be"? I think you inspired me to write something.Congratulations, that was excellent
Comment Written 10-Apr-2020
Comment from Rmocruz
I truly enjoyed reading your inspiring spiritual acrostic free verse.
The visual art selection enhances the uplifting message you so poetically
presented.
Exceptional writing overall!
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I truly enjoyed reading your inspiring spiritual acrostic free verse.
The visual art selection enhances the uplifting message you so poetically
presented.
Exceptional writing overall!
Comment Written 10-Apr-2020
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
I love the artwork that you choose to go with your poem,they are a perfect match
You captured my attention from the first word to the last I love the message that was written. If only other would get it.
This is what I call a food for thought poem.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
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I love the artwork that you choose to go with your poem,they are a perfect match
You captured my attention from the first word to the last I love the message that was written. If only other would get it.
This is what I call a food for thought poem.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
Comment Written 10-Apr-2020
Comment from Fonda Little
My favorite part was, "Go walking with God, come back to us, and be our guide to living per God's words
On your practice, we'll follow to save God's Gifted Land a good place for living today
Destined you are to talk with Him; let's know what living that God wants from man", because it encourages readers to have a relationship with God!
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My favorite part was, "Go walking with God, come back to us, and be our guide to living per God's words
On your practice, we'll follow to save God's Gifted Land a good place for living today
Destined you are to talk with Him; let's know what living that God wants from man", because it encourages readers to have a relationship with God!
Comment Written 09-Apr-2020
Comment from Jeffrey Ford
Thank you for writing about and spreading God's word. Walking with God is very important because God is the answer to all problems. God does invite people into Heaven. I would love to get into Heaven and God's gifted land. Thank you for sharing!
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Thank you for writing about and spreading God's word. Walking with God is very important because God is the answer to all problems. God does invite people into Heaven. I would love to get into Heaven and God's gifted land. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 09-Apr-2020
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Intriguing imagery; a fresh approach with much food for thought. It is indeed meatier than most of this genre that are typical, predictable prayers. This is in your words. Cheers. LIZ
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Intriguing imagery; a fresh approach with much food for thought. It is indeed meatier than most of this genre that are typical, predictable prayers. This is in your words. Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 08-Apr-2020
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
When one truly understands God's ways, it shows in his/her daily life. Your words paint a good picture of this to me. The picture you chose is a good pairing. Your words flow smoothly with a great overall message. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan
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When one truly understands God's ways, it shows in his/her daily life. Your words paint a good picture of this to me. The picture you chose is a good pairing. Your words flow smoothly with a great overall message. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 08-Apr-2020
Comment from royowen
Listening is hard for human beings to do. If one can finally get it. One gets to know how beneficial it is, and realise that there are more things in heaven and earth, well done my friend, beautifully written my fiend, blessings Roy
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Listening is hard for human beings to do. If one can finally get it. One gets to know how beneficial it is, and realise that there are more things in heaven and earth, well done my friend, beautifully written my fiend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 08-Apr-2020
Comment from Lil' Mormon Boy
Your poem reminds me of the old gospel tunes I used to listen to as a boy.
Songs like "The Rugged Old Cross", "Beyond the Sunset" and others.
Your poems are always uplifting, with the thought that God loves his children and to be aware of his love.
Thanks for sharing.
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Your poem reminds me of the old gospel tunes I used to listen to as a boy.
Songs like "The Rugged Old Cross", "Beyond the Sunset" and others.
Your poems are always uplifting, with the thought that God loves his children and to be aware of his love.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2020
Comment from Susan Larson
I especially like your line "My God is the Only Governor, Organizer, and Destroyer of His created Universe" and that you capitalize all the pronouns referring to Him, as many don't. It would help if you made the words of your acrostic more prominent. It was a little distracting looking for them as I read it the first time. Keep sharing your faith. It is uplifting to read your words.
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I especially like your line "My God is the Only Governor, Organizer, and Destroyer of His created Universe" and that you capitalize all the pronouns referring to Him, as many don't. It would help if you made the words of your acrostic more prominent. It was a little distracting looking for them as I read it the first time. Keep sharing your faith. It is uplifting to read your words.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2020
