Blended Families
A 6 word poem19 total reviews
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Chrissy710
I like your six words of my kids, your kids and the combination saying Our Kids; along with picture and your authors note
Blended families are quite a mixture sometimes and it may take some time to get the blend just right.
Gert
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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Hello Chrissy710
I like your six words of my kids, your kids and the combination saying Our Kids; along with picture and your authors note
Blended families are quite a mixture sometimes and it may take some time to get the blend just right.
Gert
Comment Written 15-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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Hi Gert, Thank you and yes it is worth it in the end. 6 words are challenging also Ha Ha Cheers Christine
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You are welcome Chrissy710 Gert
Comment from Bill Schott
This six-word poem, Blended Families, has the correct word count and does the math on how many and to whom go the responsibilities. All are in it together.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2019
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This six-word poem, Blended Families, has the correct word count and does the math on how many and to whom go the responsibilities. All are in it together.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2019
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Hi Bill, Thanks so much It can be difficult to get the blend right but worth the effort trying Cheers Christine
Comment from royowen
In the town where I live there are either one parent families, or alternatively blended familliies Christine, it must be tough raising kids this way, so many things to over come. Well done, great entry, good luck, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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In the town where I live there are either one parent families, or alternatively blended familliies Christine, it must be tough raising kids this way, so many things to over come. Well done, great entry, good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 11-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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Hi Roy, I think this is the norm in many cases My daughter and new partner have a blended family it is hard work especially with so many differences however they are getting there Cheers Thought this may so OK Cheers Christine
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She deserves to do well.
Comment from lyenochka
How clever! You repeated the word, "kids" three times and only used different possessive pronouns with them and yet you tell us an important story about how many of today's families are "blended." Well done, Christine!
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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How clever! You repeated the word, "kids" three times and only used different possessive pronouns with them and yet you tell us an important story about how many of today's families are "blended." Well done, Christine!
Comment Written 11-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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Hi Helen, Thank ypu for ypir review and I hope this goes OK . My daughter has a blended family she has 4 girls and he has 2 son and daughter so it has been a work in progress to get it right, a few differences faced. Cheers Christine
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Christine. Yes that's the way it is nowadays and hopefully a congenial mix. No reason for it not to be joyful and blending. Good luck in the contest. Marilyn
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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Hi Christine. Yes that's the way it is nowadays and hopefully a congenial mix. No reason for it not to be joyful and blending. Good luck in the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 10-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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Hi Marilyn, Thank you and yes blends of all differences nowadays, Sometime can be difficult but worth working on especially with the kids Cheers for your good luck wishes Christine
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Chrissy,
WOW - you've said a lot in six, simple words.
Very true - so many blended families these days. Must be difficult to get everyone all aligned in their pecking order when families blend.
Your verse flows nicely and the image you've selected to complement your verse works well.
Nothing to suggest improving upon.
Thanks for sharing.
Jan
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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Hi Chrissy,
WOW - you've said a lot in six, simple words.
Very true - so many blended families these days. Must be difficult to get everyone all aligned in their pecking order when families blend.
Your verse flows nicely and the image you've selected to complement your verse works well.
Nothing to suggest improving upon.
Thanks for sharing.
Jan
Comment Written 10-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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Hi Jan.cThank so much for reading my poem Yes 6 words is quite limiting so one has to make them count LOL Thought this may do OK Cheers Christine
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Chrissy
= Excellent poem for the contest.
= It's true, no matter who the kids belong to, in the end they all become 'our kids.'
= Nicely penned with complimentary artwork as well with the silhouettes.
= Good Luck, my friend.
Cheers, J (*<*)
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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Hi, Chrissy
= Excellent poem for the contest.
= It's true, no matter who the kids belong to, in the end they all become 'our kids.'
= Nicely penned with complimentary artwork as well with the silhouettes.
= Good Luck, my friend.
Cheers, J (*<*)
Comment Written 10-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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Hi Jackie,cThanks for your review 6 words hard to come up with something meaningfull and yes it has to be our kids. My daughter has a blended family hard work sometimes bit getting it right The kids need to be ours Cheers Christine
Comment from Gloria ....
Ha, this is terrific Christine. These blended families are perfect examples of showing how it CAN work if everyone works really hard at it.
Best of luck to you with the Contest Committee. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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Ha, this is terrific Christine. These blended families are perfect examples of showing how it CAN work if everyone works really hard at it.
Best of luck to you with the Contest Committee. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 10-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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Hi Gloria, Thanks my friend always nice to hear from you. And it can work even with the difficulties faced at times. Cheers for your good luck Christine
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made effective use of all six words in this poem that really
says a great deal. If a situation doesn't get past "mine and yours"
to "ours," complete happiness isn't likely.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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You have made effective use of all six words in this poem that really
says a great deal. If a situation doesn't get past "mine and yours"
to "ours," complete happiness isn't likely.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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Hi Janice, Thank for your review and yes must get to the our in a relationship to make it work properly Hard work but worth it in most cases Cheers Christine
Comment from Sugarray77
Chrissy...This is a wonderful verse you have written. It reads well and makes such a good and dramatic point. Well done on the theme and presentation.
All the best,
Melissa
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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Chrissy...This is a wonderful verse you have written. It reads well and makes such a good and dramatic point. Well done on the theme and presentation.
All the best,
Melissa
Comment Written 10-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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Hi Melissa, Thank you for your kind words and I hope it goes Ok Cheers Christine
