Oscar & Olivia
Different is good.15 total reviews
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Maria,
I absolutely ADORE this story! Love the alliteration in the names you've selected - matching name with species. And the message is a good one -- especially these days!
I wish I had a six star to award, as this is a perfect write!
Thanks for sharing!
Jan
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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Hi Maria,
I absolutely ADORE this story! Love the alliteration in the names you've selected - matching name with species. And the message is a good one -- especially these days!
I wish I had a six star to award, as this is a perfect write!
Thanks for sharing!
Jan
Comment Written 14-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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Thanks so much for your kind words, Jan.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Great story for children that clearly points out that it's okay to be different.
Sometimes you can turn your unique differences into a positive thing rather than negative one, if you approach them in a positive frame of mind.
Nicely done, Maria.
~Dean
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2019
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Great story for children that clearly points out that it's okay to be different.
Sometimes you can turn your unique differences into a positive thing rather than negative one, if you approach them in a positive frame of mind.
Nicely done, Maria.
~Dean
Comment Written 12-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2019
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Thanks for reading, Dean.
Comment from cflorian8
Your story exemplifies the perseverance of the individual trying to follow their dreams contrary to the opinion of others. The entry is spaced out making it an easy read. I see nothing grammatically. I hope your story inspires other writers to push forward as it has done for me.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
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Your story exemplifies the perseverance of the individual trying to follow their dreams contrary to the opinion of others. The entry is spaced out making it an easy read. I see nothing grammatically. I hope your story inspires other writers to push forward as it has done for me.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
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Thanks so much for reading.
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Maria
= This was really cute.
= I like the way you incorporated their names with who they are.
= Super read for the little ones.
Cheers, J (*<*)
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
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Hi, Maria
= This was really cute.
= I like the way you incorporated their names with who they are.
= Super read for the little ones.
Cheers, J (*<*)
Comment Written 10-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
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Thanks for reading, Jax.
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Maria. Your writing is really so clever and, as always, I enjoyed this charming story. It flows well, is clear and amusing. Great job. Marilyn
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
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Hi Maria. Your writing is really so clever and, as always, I enjoyed this charming story. It flows well, is clear and amusing. Great job. Marilyn
Comment Written 09-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
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Thanks for reading, Marilyn.
Comment from aryr
This was so delightful to read Maria. It was a great idea to not only create Oscar and his family and of course his uniqueness but to use all of this as a way to establish a moral. Very much enjoyed and rather well done.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
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This was so delightful to read Maria. It was a great idea to not only create Oscar and his family and of course his uniqueness but to use all of this as a way to establish a moral. Very much enjoyed and rather well done.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
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Thanks so much for reading.
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most welcome
Comment from misscookie
I love That cute picture
And you captured my attention from the first line to the last it is a perfect match
The message in the story is so true
This would make a lovely children book.I'm sure they would learn and enjoy
This is what I cal la food for though write
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
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I love That cute picture
And you captured my attention from the first line to the last it is a perfect match
The message in the story is so true
This would make a lovely children book.I'm sure they would learn and enjoy
This is what I cal la food for though write
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
Comment Written 09-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
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Thanks for your review, Cookie.
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
Hello there, Maria, This is such a cute little story. I found your "coral engineers" quite clever. It's an entertaining story and would be a hit published in children's books.
~Kerry
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
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Hello there, Maria, This is such a cute little story. I found your "coral engineers" quite clever. It's an entertaining story and would be a hit published in children's books.
~Kerry
Comment Written 09-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
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Thanks for reading, Kerry.
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You're very welcome.
Comment from Tootsie55
Ha, you have to look at my song over in Sankey about Being Diffierent. Are you on PC or Apple Mac? The music should work if on PC, otherwise I have to make it an MP3 or get you an alternate player. Enjoyed this and I loved the picture. I mifght have the song on my web site have to go check where it is.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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Ha, you have to look at my song over in Sankey about Being Diffierent. Are you on PC or Apple Mac? The music should work if on PC, otherwise I have to make it an MP3 or get you an alternate player. Enjoyed this and I loved the picture. I mifght have the song on my web site have to go check where it is.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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I have a Mac, in fact the other day I tried to listen to one of your audios and I couldn't.
Thanks for reading.
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I am sorry here is the other song about being different. Sorry you can't hear the music will work on converting to MP3.
There is an alternate Music Player someone gave me ages ago for Apple Mac ses if I can get that for you.
https://www.fanstory.com/displaystory.jsp?id=635635
Comment from Sugarray77
Maria, I loved this imaginative tale of the Octupus and his family. It seemed each one was different and unusual.. The twins were not only creative, but polictically clever too. Well done on this fun write.
Melissa
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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Maria, I loved this imaginative tale of the Octupus and his family. It seemed each one was different and unusual.. The twins were not only creative, but polictically clever too. Well done on this fun write.
Melissa
Comment Written 09-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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Thanks for reading, Melissa. Take care.
