Haiku and Senryu Suites
Viewing comments for Chapter 23 "Sing a Song of Life"Book of Haiku, Senryu & Lanturne Suites
5 total reviews
Comment from irishauthorme
Wow, I liked the way you wove your verses through all the stages of life, especially the unborn listening to songs in the womb! See you exercised your poetic right(And all those who nitpick for correctness can kiss your Irish ass) to express an idea rather than an ideology. Great! As much as I enjoy and appreciate the genius of Mozart, Bach, Bethoven, I believe the music of the Angelic Choir will flow through us and bring elation to our hearts and joy to our souls.
irish
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
Wow, I liked the way you wove your verses through all the stages of life, especially the unborn listening to songs in the womb! See you exercised your poetic right(And all those who nitpick for correctness can kiss your Irish ass) to express an idea rather than an ideology. Great! As much as I enjoy and appreciate the genius of Mozart, Bach, Bethoven, I believe the music of the Angelic Choir will flow through us and bring elation to our hearts and joy to our souls.
irish
Comment Written 11-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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Dear Irish, thank you for your glowing review. Your generosity with the Stars is supported by your detailed description of how you perceived it to be. I thought the beginning was good myself. More to come thanks again.
BB
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This really moves me emotionally. In my book Be Wee With Bea she sees how nature sings a song and she dances to the stones tinkling as they are carried with the stream. That spirit of nature enters us and is passed on by the nature of our own mothers. This is a beautiful tribute to the musical journey of your friend. Well expressed.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
This really moves me emotionally. In my book Be Wee With Bea she sees how nature sings a song and she dances to the stones tinkling as they are carried with the stream. That spirit of nature enters us and is passed on by the nature of our own mothers. This is a beautiful tribute to the musical journey of your friend. Well expressed.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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Thanks for your comments Liz, I really appreciate your input on this. We seem to have a lot in common and understand the intricate nature of our connection to his mother in a living things around us.
Thanks so much for your continued support and comments.
Blessings
Brother Badger
Darren
Comment from lyenochka
A thought-filled reflection on the music of life in this suite of haikus! I like how you take us from birth to flying to heaven and the process of learning to love others and ourselves in between.
One haiku was more than the typical 5-7-5 - it has 5-7-7-5:
"the tune starts early
nestled in your mother's womb;
she hums and sings melodies
you are comforted"
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
A thought-filled reflection on the music of life in this suite of haikus! I like how you take us from birth to flying to heaven and the process of learning to love others and ourselves in between.
One haiku was more than the typical 5-7-5 - it has 5-7-7-5:
"the tune starts early
nestled in your mother's womb;
she hums and sings melodies
you are comforted"
Comment Written 08-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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Yes very observant Helen but for some reason I could not seem to separate those two from the middle of that hiking so I just left it the way it was utilizing poetic license. I really appreciate your comments your affections on this your perceptions and your continued support and friendship here menu great deal to me.
Blessings
Brother Badger
Darren
Comment from 24chas
I really enjoyed this suite of haikus, badger 29. It was an impressive effort how they all flowed together with a common theme. Very unique. Good job and keep up the good work.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
I really enjoyed this suite of haikus, badger 29. It was an impressive effort how they all flowed together with a common theme. Very unique. Good job and keep up the good work.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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Thanks again Shadows I really appreciate your comments here you are reflections and the way that you dissected the poem to related to your own perception
Blessings,
Brother Badger
Comment from Melissa Heilig
I enjoyed the extended haiku pattern which enhanced the rhythm of the poem. It had a cheery mood and tone. Interesting word choices made this fun to read.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2019
I enjoyed the extended haiku pattern which enhanced the rhythm of the poem. It had a cheery mood and tone. Interesting word choices made this fun to read.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2019
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Thanks Melissi, t's always a pleasure to meet and associate with new people here. I have written extensively published a book, and I utilize the Haiku because it forces me to focus a lot of thoughts into a small area.
Again, a pleasure to become acquainted with you here .
Blessings,
Brother Badger