Renaissance of Enchantment
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Chapter Three, Part 1"It was their world long before our existence...
20 total reviews
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi, Yvette,
Thank you for sharing another chapter in this intriguing story. It continues to interest me and draw me in more and more. (Good job!)
I especially loved this sentence, 'Their handling of him in such a possessive manner never failed to turn his crank.'
Looking forward to the next part,
~MP~
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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Hi, Yvette,
Thank you for sharing another chapter in this intriguing story. It continues to interest me and draw me in more and more. (Good job!)
I especially loved this sentence, 'Their handling of him in such a possessive manner never failed to turn his crank.'
Looking forward to the next part,
~MP~
Comment Written 09-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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Thank you for taking the time for the review, MP -- I do appreciate it. :) Have a good weekend! ;)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written chapter. It is always amazing to see how many people arrive at a funeral. Some people we did not see in years suddenly appear and not always with good intentions.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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A very well-written chapter. It is always amazing to see how many people arrive at a funeral. Some people we did not see in years suddenly appear and not always with good intentions.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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So right on that final point, Sandra!! ;) ;) Thanx for your time in reading this chapter -- I do look forward to your take on things! ;) ;) Have a wonderful remainder of the weekend! ;) ;) Yvette
Comment from Ricky1024
Hello this was well-written rich and Theme and Imagery.
It read well and worked well for mr.
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Have a blessed day.
Dr. Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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Hello this was well-written rich and Theme and Imagery.
It read well and worked well for mr.
"Adjective çwith no grammar issue.
ejective an object that comes after both excellent exceptional of descriptive measure.
Have a blessed day.
Dr. Ricky 1024
Comment Written 09-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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Thank you for stopping in today, Dr. Ricky -- so appreciate your time and your review! :) ;) Yvette
Comment from royowen
I like the way you write so easily, and that your characters, stand out in thoight, deed and description. I don't think these social scenes are particularly easy to describe, but both the characters and imagery of movement work well together. And the characters are so interesting and yet all unique and eclectic, well done, blessings Yvette, Roy
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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I like the way you write so easily, and that your characters, stand out in thoight, deed and description. I don't think these social scenes are particularly easy to describe, but both the characters and imagery of movement work well together. And the characters are so interesting and yet all unique and eclectic, well done, blessings Yvette, Roy
Comment Written 09-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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I am glad that my style is not off-putting or unprofessional for you, Roy -- so good to hear that you are enjoying...your encouragement is uplifting! :) ;) And, yep! Eclectic is exactly the term I would use to describe this motley crew!! ;) ;) Thanx for stopping in today and you take care over there! :) ;) Yvette :)
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Well done, you're a bold writer Yvette, encouraging others.
Comment from TheStoryMan
I like Geoffrey. He has a great attitude. I do hope Stephen has had some luck in finding Maggie. The Refuge needs her. This is a really good story. It captures the reader's interest. The characters are all well developed.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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I like Geoffrey. He has a great attitude. I do hope Stephen has had some luck in finding Maggie. The Refuge needs her. This is a really good story. It captures the reader's interest. The characters are all well developed.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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Thank you so very much for your encouraging comments, Ron -- and for your time in reviewing. Both are so very welcome and appreciated! :) :) Be sure to stay tuned ... take care and have a wonderful remainder of the weekend! ;) ;) Yvette :)
Comment from Debbie Pope
You have to publish on Sundays for my sixes, Yvette.Probably lots of other reviewers are out as well. This is certainly deserving. I have read it several times trying to find a weakness, and I just can't. Reading several times was helpful with the understanding. I was getting a little confused with the three way marriage, but it is perfectly explained in the story. Geoffrey certainly seems to have a sexual weakness the way that he is attracted to Gary, Charlie, Demetrius, and Amelia. But, if Gary and Charlie trust him, so will I.
This format is reminding me of Arthur Hailey's Airport and Hotel. Every chapter is devoted to a totally different setting and character. This chapter is mostly Geoffrey, but we may not get back to him for a few more chapters. I always loved that format. It makes the plot more intricate.
Glad you got something posted today. It gave me something to look forward to.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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You have to publish on Sundays for my sixes, Yvette.Probably lots of other reviewers are out as well. This is certainly deserving. I have read it several times trying to find a weakness, and I just can't. Reading several times was helpful with the understanding. I was getting a little confused with the three way marriage, but it is perfectly explained in the story. Geoffrey certainly seems to have a sexual weakness the way that he is attracted to Gary, Charlie, Demetrius, and Amelia. But, if Gary and Charlie trust him, so will I.
This format is reminding me of Arthur Hailey's Airport and Hotel. Every chapter is devoted to a totally different setting and character. This chapter is mostly Geoffrey, but we may not get back to him for a few more chapters. I always loved that format. It makes the plot more intricate.
Glad you got something posted today. It gave me something to look forward to.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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Hey, MQ -- hope the day's going well down there! ;) Thanx for you wonderful comments...they are very uplifting to read! Although, you oughta check back on the Amelia thing with Geoffrey... he was actually making fun of her 'disapproving' of his marriage and PDA's :) ;) ;) Glad you're not ready to bail ... perhaps I do have an off-putting style when I write a 'big' thing...??? I don't know, but at least you seem to be following it alright. :) ;) Thank you for your encouragement and you enjoy the rest of your weekend! ;) ;) Yvette :)
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I certainly did not say that your style was off-putting. I love your style. I never know what to expect in each chapter. I could not be more pleased. As to Amelia, I know that Geoffrey was using his winks and sexuality to make her uncomfortable. I think that he is trustworthy. He still uses his sexuality to communicate. I just clarify matters so you know that we are getting it. You are doing a fabulous job with this book.
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Not you, silly goose!! Just....others. :) ;) ;) :0
Comment from Miss Sherry
Very earthy and realistic. Strong language useful for the situation. You weave a fine tale for us here. I love the artwork, that house is gorgeous. You keep the story straight, so that we can follow the characters and follow along. Very good writing!
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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Very earthy and realistic. Strong language useful for the situation. You weave a fine tale for us here. I love the artwork, that house is gorgeous. You keep the story straight, so that we can follow the characters and follow along. Very good writing!
Comment Written 08-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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Thanx for dropping by, Sherry -- really appreciate your hanging in with us!! :) ;) You have a great remainder of the weekend! :) ;) Yvette :)
Comment from Wabigoon
Y. M. --
This is very sophisticated. I have not sorted it all out. First post I have read of yours. The Refuge. Okay. what is it? I will look for more posts to learn of his.
Thanks
Wabigoon/Jeff
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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Y. M. --
This is very sophisticated. I have not sorted it all out. First post I have read of yours. The Refuge. Okay. what is it? I will look for more posts to learn of his.
Thanks
Wabigoon/Jeff
Comment Written 08-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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Wow! :) ;) So glad to have you drop by, Jeff -- suffice to say that The Refuge[(at this point for readers :) ;) ] is a boarding house...of sorts. :) :) Feel free to pop into the portfolio and check out where we've been so far -- look forward to your take on things moving forward! ;) ;) Take care and have a wonderful remainder of the weekend! :) Yvette :)
Comment from country ranch writer
Looks like our Godfrey is the center of attention today at the funeral with all forward to more.this display of affection.. Nice work up for this story and looking
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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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Looks like our Godfrey is the center of attention today at the funeral with all forward to more.this display of affection.. Nice work up for this story and looking
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Comment Written 08-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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Thank you for your review! ;) :) Have a wonderful remainder of the weekend! :) ;)
Comment from djsaxon
Terrific write. I will have to back track to get my head around the plot and the parade of characters but the quality of the write prompts me to do just that, Thank you. Cheers - DJ
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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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Terrific write. I will have to back track to get my head around the plot and the parade of characters but the quality of the write prompts me to do just that, Thank you. Cheers - DJ
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Comment Written 08-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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Wow! :) ;) So glad to have you on board, DJ -- look forward to your take on things moving forward! ;) ;) So glad you enjoyed -- take care and have a wonderful remainder of the weekend! :) Yvette :)
