Haiku and Senryu Suites
Viewing comments for Chapter 22 "Haiku For The Census"Book of Haiku, Senryu & Lanturne Suites
5 total reviews
Comment from Bucketlist
Darren, I really enjoyed your fresh approach to poetry style. I thought the image was perfect and I liked your nature images.
The only pice that seemed a little disjointed was the last verse. But that was just my opinion.,
Hugs, Trisha
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2019
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Darren, I really enjoyed your fresh approach to poetry style. I thought the image was perfect and I liked your nature images.
The only pice that seemed a little disjointed was the last verse. But that was just my opinion.,
Hugs, Trisha
Comment Written 16-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2019
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So much for your review and comments, the last one was supposed to be about the Sixth Sense ESP and then decided to do a prophecy dream it was an attempt thanks again I really appreciate your comments.
Blessings,
Brother Badger
Darren
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Nice to see you?re still actively writing
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Yes, but slowly
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It is so nice to connect with you again Trisha I appreciate your comments and apologize that I don't spend more time reviewing myself. Hugs, Darren
Comment from irishauthorme
A lively, colorful illustration of many things we can experience through our senses if we only take the time from our daily pursuits, like "Stop and Smell the Roses!"
Actually, during the summer months here we try to get down to the reservoir and catch a few rainbows. They are delicious fresh out of the cold water! The hills are covered with wildflowers in Spring, a joy to the soul after the long, dreary winter with months of freezing temperatures and gray skies.
irish
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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A lively, colorful illustration of many things we can experience through our senses if we only take the time from our daily pursuits, like "Stop and Smell the Roses!"
Actually, during the summer months here we try to get down to the reservoir and catch a few rainbows. They are delicious fresh out of the cold water! The hills are covered with wildflowers in Spring, a joy to the soul after the long, dreary winter with months of freezing temperatures and gray skies.
irish
Comment Written 11-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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Thank you again for your generous review here and I am pleased that your understanding the purpose behind this is accurate, perceptive, and astute.
I really appreciate your comments
perspective and consistent glowing reviews!
Blessings,
Brother Badger
Comment from Liz O'Neill
Your sensory descriptions bring the reader right along with you to also experience the coolness of the river flowing through their sockless toes. What fun. This draws the reader in who can identify or those who can vicariously enjoy the experience the joy. It all makes me joyful and grateful that I am able to do this every year. The reader is invited to reflect on what they are grateful for.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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Your sensory descriptions bring the reader right along with you to also experience the coolness of the river flowing through their sockless toes. What fun. This draws the reader in who can identify or those who can vicariously enjoy the experience the joy. It all makes me joyful and grateful that I am able to do this every year. The reader is invited to reflect on what they are grateful for.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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I am truly grateful for your continued support and comments. I like the way you analyze it and talk about how it draws the reader in it is a way of kind of reliving it, a shared reality with my treasured readers and
Interviewers here
BB
Comment from 24chas
Now this was a really cool read, Badger 29. I really loved the "feel" of this one and you seem to be a master at the haiku. Good job and I look forward to reading more from you.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2019
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Now this was a really cool read, Badger 29. I really loved the "feel" of this one and you seem to be a master at the haiku. Good job and I look forward to reading more from you.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2019
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Thanks 24, it's always a pleasure to meet and associate with new people here. I have written extensively published a book, and I utilize the Haiku because it forces me to focus a lot of thoughts into a small area.
Again, a pleasure to become acquainted with you here .
Blessings,
Brother Badger
Comment from Melissa Heilig
I found myself going back reading go figure out which sense each stanza represented. This shows how my curiosity was piqued. I enjoyed the descriptive word choices that helped me get a better mental picture.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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I found myself going back reading go figure out which sense each stanza represented. This shows how my curiosity was piqued. I enjoyed the descriptive word choices that helped me get a better mental picture.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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Thanks again once I appreciate your comments. In my defense, this is kind of a new experiment for me. I've already written a great deal of other poems and published the book so if you're interested in my other writing,
please look in my portfolio.
there are some very different poems beside the Haiku form
Blessings,
Brother Badger
