Comment from sunnilicious

Excellent

Sometimes, it best not to think... Just live. Sharing and loving go together. Words and actions are very different, however, actions can mean more than words. Some of us don't always choose to be alone. Well thought out and clearly written poem. thank you for sharing yourself so openly. Nice work.

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2019

Comment from meeshu

Excellent

this is a very harshly introspective piece of free verse. that is not necessarily a bad thing, but the author could cut him/herself a little slack. a good piece, Jonadab...................meeshu

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2019

I always anticipate reviews from you because I learn from it, I will cut myself some slack... and I do appreciate.

Comment from tbacha58

Excellent

But fall short of stopping to breathe
Solitary is not all I want to know,
But it seems it's what I know best

Your poem reminded me of my actual situation. Your words made me realize more how lonely a human being can get to if we let go. Nothing is the same, my ideas my strength passes unaccounted for by others and myself. It's sad. But the comparison to looking up at the moon in the picture brings life to the reviewer. Terry.

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2019

Thank You, I appreciate your sincere review.

Comment from HealingMuse

Good

Hi Jona,

Nice introspective piece you've crafted!

One small offering for your consideration:

I believe if you change distant to distance, the verse may flow more effectively and more easily convey your intended message.

(Maybe not - LOL. Poetry is so wonderfully free form!) :-)

Thanks for sharing,

Jan

PS - Are ypu a student of C.G. Jung's psych theory? If so, you might enjoy reading my very first post from years ago. ;-)

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2019

Thank you