Love's Longing Heart
English Sonnet/ longing8 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
I returned to offer my six for this outstanding piece. My favorite line: "echoing hearts share oneness, never far." This reminds me of my husband, Jackson. Your poetry is just as beautiful as you are; a delight to read and take in.
All my best,
Sally xo
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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I returned to offer my six for this outstanding piece. My favorite line: "echoing hearts share oneness, never far." This reminds me of my husband, Jackson. Your poetry is just as beautiful as you are; a delight to read and take in.
All my best,
Sally xo
Comment Written 07-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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You are too sweet!!! but thank you, I am happy you enjoyed this piece.
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You are most welcome! Sal :+)
Comment from Richard J
Tremendously moving and emotional, Susan.
You've truly captured the spirit of the contest with this heart-gripping Sonnet, and that ethereal whisper of a picture sets the virtually perfect moment.
Whatever you may decide is the best option, you're most definitely touched my heart. Your Sonnet should do very well in the contest ... the best of luck to You.
Thank you ever-so warmly, Susan ~ Richard : )
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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Tremendously moving and emotional, Susan.
You've truly captured the spirit of the contest with this heart-gripping Sonnet, and that ethereal whisper of a picture sets the virtually perfect moment.
Whatever you may decide is the best option, you're most definitely touched my heart. Your Sonnet should do very well in the contest ... the best of luck to You.
Thank you ever-so warmly, Susan ~ Richard : )
Comment Written 12-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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Thank you Richard for this lovely review, I do appreciate you taking the time.
Comment from Christine C Autry
I enjoyed your poem it was really good. I can relate to this longing in so many ways. Your artwork was beautiful. Thank you for this heartwarming poem.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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I enjoyed your poem it was really good. I can relate to this longing in so many ways. Your artwork was beautiful. Thank you for this heartwarming poem.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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Hello Christine! Thank you for stopping by and leaving such a kind review! I do appreciated it...longing is a tough one huh? sigh
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi,
Ah, a lovely sonnet you've penned (or typed - lol) here. A great contest entry.
I cannot discern anything amiss here to suggest improving upon.
The image you've selected works very well to help convey the meaning of your eloquent verse.
Thank you for sharing and best of luck in the voting booths! :-)
Jan
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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Hi,
Ah, a lovely sonnet you've penned (or typed - lol) here. A great contest entry.
I cannot discern anything amiss here to suggest improving upon.
The image you've selected works very well to help convey the meaning of your eloquent verse.
Thank you for sharing and best of luck in the voting booths! :-)
Jan
Comment Written 08-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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Well hello! Thank you for the awesome review and good luck wishes! I do appreciate you taking the time to read and review! Thanks again.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Wow - well, I don't know about anyone else, but this is the perfect entry here -- it not only echos the author's emotions of longing but it brings to the reader a sense of completeness with the night. A beautiful offering -- best of luck at the polls! ;) ;)
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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Wow - well, I don't know about anyone else, but this is the perfect entry here -- it not only echos the author's emotions of longing but it brings to the reader a sense of completeness with the night. A beautiful offering -- best of luck at the polls! ;) ;)
Comment Written 08-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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Hello! What a sweet review!! Thank you so very much.You picked up on the key elements here.. :-) Thanks for the good luck wishes!! We shall see:-) thanks again.
Comment from WalkerMan
Lovely, lovely, lovely. No one else pours as much raw emotion into love poems as you do. Any man reading this would want to be the "you" addressed as the one so loved and longed for. This English Sonnet is definitely worthy of publication, as it compares well to the best love poems I ever have seen. Superb, and beautifully illustrated in perfect match to the theme. Gorgeous. I love it all.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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Lovely, lovely, lovely. No one else pours as much raw emotion into love poems as you do. Any man reading this would want to be the "you" addressed as the one so loved and longed for. This English Sonnet is definitely worthy of publication, as it compares well to the best love poems I ever have seen. Superb, and beautifully illustrated in perfect match to the theme. Gorgeous. I love it all.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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:-) What can I say? Another beautiful review. Thanks Mike for taking the time to read and really understand this one.You're commenst are too kind :-)
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You are most welcome, Susan. I know splendid work when I see it. You truly are a master at conveying emotion through words in a well-chosen form befitting the theme, and masterful too in finding beautiful images which match the themes of your poems so well. -- Mike
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image and presentation.
-A good poem with effective
rhyme and imagery:
"Silk breezes grant repose 'long verdant glen."
-I also like the first line introducing Luna.
-The first verse sets up a peaceful mood.
-You share thoughts about love in the
next stanzas, and show a longing to
be where he is.
-The couplet is also very good.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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-Very nice image and presentation.
-A good poem with effective
rhyme and imagery:
"Silk breezes grant repose 'long verdant glen."
-I also like the first line introducing Luna.
-The first verse sets up a peaceful mood.
-You share thoughts about love in the
next stanzas, and show a longing to
be where he is.
-The couplet is also very good.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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Hello Pam! Thank you for another lovely review! Makes me smile :-)
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You are welcome. I am glad it makes you smile🙂 A special one just for you!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your well-written, moving sonnet effectively conveys the emotion of
longing for that special absent one--the sense of urgency that is an element
of longing.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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Your well-written, moving sonnet effectively conveys the emotion of
longing for that special absent one--the sense of urgency that is an element
of longing.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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Hello Janice, thank you for taking the time to read and review! Much appreciated.
