Comment from HealingMuse

Excellent

Hi,

I absolutely LOVE this piece!

The lady in the image your have selected is absolutely adorable. What an apparently joyous soul!

Nothing here that I can discern as requiring revision - it's perfect "as-is!"

Thank you for sharing your great work with us, and best of luck in the contest!'

Jan

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2019

Thanks so much, Jan!!

reply by HealingMuse on 08-Feb-2019

You are most welcome. My pleasure! Jan

Comment from Roxanna Andrews

Exceptional

This is just too cute! I love the picture. She looks like someone I'd like to meet. =} She is the definition of age is just a number. Well done and I hope you do well in the contest.

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2019

Thanks so much, Roxanna.... much appreciated!!

Comment from RodG

Excellent

What a wonderful way of looking at AGE. How many people can ignore the years and physical changes in their bodies? I can't. We can learn so much from the Speaker in your short poem. Rod

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2019

Thanks so much, Rod!!

Comment from Sandra Elizabeth Williams

Excellent

.. And there's space for more so you're not done yet!

I like your positive 13-syllable poem. It makes me think, oh yes, thats definitely the way to do it. If I haven't enough lines then I haven't laughed enough and I'm gonna need lots more laugh.

I love the photo/picture that you have used. This lady seems so mello!

Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2019

Thanks so much, Sandra. Much appreciated.

reply by Sandra Elizabeth Williams on 08-Feb-2019

You're very welcome.

Comment from meeshu

Excellent

You have created some great images here, your writing is thoughtful and descriptive. this could double as a poster. good luck in the contest..

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 Comment Written 08-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2019

Thanks so much, Meeshu!

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is an excellent thirteen syllable poem.
From the looks of the picture, she has laughed quite a bit
and led a very happy life. We should all be so 'lucky.'
Great picture
Well done
Good luck in the contest
RS


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 Comment Written 08-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2019

Thanks so much for the great review!

Much appreciated.