Eyes on You
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "Change of Plans"Tommy tries to rescue their family.
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Comment from Ulla
Hi Misty, I don't feel good about this at all, and I don't like him to work for Hernandez. Not good a t all. This is my penny worth. Great chapter and I'm looking forward to reading on. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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Hi Misty, I don't feel good about this at all, and I don't like him to work for Hernandez. Not good a t all. This is my penny worth. Great chapter and I'm looking forward to reading on. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 09-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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Thank you for your great review. It tickles me to know that you are so in to the story. You're right no good can come from this reunion.
Thank you again for your kind review, all your help and support, take care.
Comment from apky
Pöökie brough a grin to my face.
Poor Tommy - I wonder if working for Hernandez is the best job he can do at the moment. He still has so many odds against him and I'm still rooting for him to pull it all off, and be able to finally save his wife without any legal entanglements.
Another great job, Misty. Sorry, no sixers left.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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Pöökie brough a grin to my face.
Poor Tommy - I wonder if working for Hernandez is the best job he can do at the moment. He still has so many odds against him and I'm still rooting for him to pull it all off, and be able to finally save his wife without any legal entanglements.
Another great job, Misty. Sorry, no sixers left.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review and your virtual six. Working for that degenerate probably isn't the best idea. When Jen finds out you know there will be hell to pay. Hopefully, this is only a temporary thing.
Thank you again for your wonderful review, all your help, support and friendship, it's always greatly appreciated, take care.
Comment from krprice
Excellent post.
"I'll come. . . No need to capitalize "s" in sir.
Things are starting to close in on Tommy. However, the woman was a bitch about things. While I don't feel sorry for Tommy, I do have sympathy for his wife.
Karlene
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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Excellent post.
"I'll come. . . No need to capitalize "s" in sir.
Things are starting to close in on Tommy. However, the woman was a bitch about things. While I don't feel sorry for Tommy, I do have sympathy for his wife.
Karlene
Comment Written 09-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much for your kind review, I'm so glad your enjoying it. Bad choices does put Tommy in situations he wouldn't be in that's for sure. The decisions may be wrong, but his reasons are good.
Thank you again for your nice review, all your help support and friendship, take care.
Comment from TheStoryMan
More trouble for Tommy. He really can't get a break. Dogs are supposed to be secured at all times when you're having any work done in your home. I have a bad feeling about him working for Hernandez.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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More trouble for Tommy. He really can't get a break. Dogs are supposed to be secured at all times when you're having any work done in your home. I have a bad feeling about him working for Hernandez.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much for reading my chapter, I'm glad you enjoyed it. It would've saved Tommy a lot of trouble if they had have been that's for sure. Hernandez isn't a nice guy, he dabbles in several illegal businesses.
Thank you again for your great review, it's always greatly appreciated, take care.
Comment from KatyM
Love the name of the mutt: Pookie? lol Too cute! I can just visualize the scene when Tommy got bit. hehe
Poor Tommy, now he really will have to turn to a life of crime thanks to Pookie. Bummer....today James and I were busy getting his pre-emploment stuff done. He has to get two TB tests done. I have never heard of that before but since he is going to be working for a hospital (computers) he has to have two of them, a physical and a flu shot. Oh and of course a drug test, check references, and credit report. Things he has to do just to get a job! hehe Loved your chapter. No additions or subtractions.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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Love the name of the mutt: Pookie? lol Too cute! I can just visualize the scene when Tommy got bit. hehe
Poor Tommy, now he really will have to turn to a life of crime thanks to Pookie. Bummer....today James and I were busy getting his pre-emploment stuff done. He has to get two TB tests done. I have never heard of that before but since he is going to be working for a hospital (computers) he has to have two of them, a physical and a flu shot. Oh and of course a drug test, check references, and credit report. Things he has to do just to get a job! hehe Loved your chapter. No additions or subtractions.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much for your great review. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I thought Pookie would be a name an excentric old snob would use lol. It does seem like you have to jump through a lot of hoops to get hired. I'm sure it'll be worth it in the end.
Thank you again for your great review, all your help and support, take care.
Comment from country ranch writer
Seems like Tommy is living on borrowed time he has got to protect his wife and get shed of all of this nonsense, Nice work up for this story.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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Seems like Tommy is living on borrowed time he has got to protect his wife and get shed of all of this nonsense, Nice work up for this story.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much for your great review I'm glad you enjoyed it. Your right, He needs to get his head on straight and concentrate on what really matters, his wife and her health. Hopefully he'll do that soon.
Thank you again for all your help, support and friendship, it means a lot to me, take care.
Comment from Sugarray77
Phyllis, you are continuing to write very good chapters as we go through the story of Tommy and all of the stuff that happens to him. Now, you have squeezed the tension tighter by having him become a suspect. Well written, as always.
Melissa
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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Phyllis, you are continuing to write very good chapters as we go through the story of Tommy and all of the stuff that happens to him. Now, you have squeezed the tension tighter by having him become a suspect. Well written, as always.
Melissa
Comment Written 08-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much for your encouraging review, I's so glad that you continue to enjoy the story. I hope I can keep your enthusiasm to the end.
Thank you again for all your help, support,encouragement and friendship, it means a lot to me, take care.
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Now Tommy is really in a pickle. He has lost his job. Does that mean he loses the insurance his wife will need for the operation as well? He just gets deeper and deeper in trouble doesn't he. Poor guy. Doesn't he know crime doesn't pay? Nancy:)
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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Now Tommy is really in a pickle. He has lost his job. Does that mean he loses the insurance his wife will need for the operation as well? He just gets deeper and deeper in trouble doesn't he. Poor guy. Doesn't he know crime doesn't pay? Nancy:)
Comment Written 08-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much for your great review, and all your interest in my story, I'm glad you continue to enjoy it. If the boss decides to fire him he would lose his insurance, but right now he's just suspended. Cross your fingers that he don't get fired for Jen's sake. I think he's learning crime doesn't pay the hard way.
Thank you again for your kind review, all your help, support, and friendship, take care.
Comment from royowen
It seems they've found the DNA matches a young, healthy male. Yes poor Tommy runs into a pretty narky customer while doing repairs to the TV, while casing the place gets another mauling by the dog. Will things Gert better for him well done, blesings, Roy
Typo : Help his fatigue (a) bit. One? 2: broke her valuable(s)...
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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It seems they've found the DNA matches a young, healthy male. Yes poor Tommy runs into a pretty narky customer while doing repairs to the TV, while casing the place gets another mauling by the dog. Will things Gert better for him well done, blesings, Roy
Typo : Help his fatigue (a) bit. One? 2: broke her valuable(s)...
Comment Written 08-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much for your great review, Things do seem to get worse and worse for Tommy. Now he's on the cops radar which isn't good for him. Maybe he'll figure a way out of it, then again maybe he won't.
Thank you again for reading my chapter, for catching my mistakes, all your support and friendship, it means a lot to me, take care.
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Well done
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Good job. They must know Tommy had nothing to do with the murders, so why don't they leave him alone. Poor guy has enough on his mind without more to worry about. Of course, it's his idea to go back to drug dealing, so he deserves whatever he gets.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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Good job. They must know Tommy had nothing to do with the murders, so why don't they leave him alone. Poor guy has enough on his mind without more to worry about. Of course, it's his idea to go back to drug dealing, so he deserves whatever he gets.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much for your kind review I'm glad you enjoyed it. You're right it is his idea to lie to his wife, go back and work for Hernandez when he knows he shouldn't. But he is doing it for the greater good, to save his wife's life.
Thank you again for your great review, all your help, support and friendship. It means a lot to me, take care.
