Poetry - A Labour of Love
contest entry9 total reviews
Comment from PoemsOfDD
Debra, yes - you have done an excellent job in expressing how writing poetry is a work of intricate art and caring thought. Everyone on this site should understand these thirteen short but meaningful syllables. Well done and best of luck in the competition. ~DD
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
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Debra, yes - you have done an excellent job in expressing how writing poetry is a work of intricate art and caring thought. Everyone on this site should understand these thirteen short but meaningful syllables. Well done and best of luck in the competition. ~DD
Comment Written 10-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
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HelloDD :) Thank you so much for your lovely feedback and good luck wishes! I appreciate both :)
Comment from victor 66
Your "Lucky 13" writing prompt entry flows well and makes a statement that we all aspire to. We try to do the best we can and just once in awhile, we format "Words" that are "intricately woven with precision and care", and it's a really good feeling. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
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Your "Lucky 13" writing prompt entry flows well and makes a statement that we all aspire to. We try to do the best we can and just once in awhile, we format "Words" that are "intricately woven with precision and care", and it's a really good feeling. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
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Hello :) Thank you so much for your lovely feedback and good luck wishes! I appreciate both :)
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You are most welcome, Debra.
Comment from Debbie Pope
I am reading all of the entries in the lucky 13 contest. I've been through several, and this is my favorite by far. I like that you developed your metaphor using the photo and title. That's smart. And, it's a good metaphor to start with. That's why I like to write and read the short entries. Good ones, like this, are woven with so much care. They are examples of power over words.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
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I am reading all of the entries in the lucky 13 contest. I've been through several, and this is my favorite by far. I like that you developed your metaphor using the photo and title. That's smart. And, it's a good metaphor to start with. That's why I like to write and read the short entries. Good ones, like this, are woven with so much care. They are examples of power over words.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
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Hi Debbie :) Thank you so much for your lovely feedback. I really appreciate it! Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
oh, yes indeed, my friend. poetry is a labour of love with intricately woven words placed precisly. Oooo... I love this, wonderfully done! Good luck! ~Kerry
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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oh, yes indeed, my friend. poetry is a labour of love with intricately woven words placed precisly. Oooo... I love this, wonderfully done! Good luck! ~Kerry
Comment Written 08-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much, Kerry, for your lovely feedback and good luck wishes! I appreciate both :)
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You're very welcome.
Comment from Christine C Autry
This poem was very good. I enjoyed reading. I liked your picture it was so good. It seems like I have read this before but not sure. I still enjoyed it. Thank you for all your talent.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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This poem was very good. I enjoyed reading. I liked your picture it was so good. It seems like I have read this before but not sure. I still enjoyed it. Thank you for all your talent.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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Thank you, Christine, for your lovely feedback.
I may have read something along the same lines in the past, but I deliberated long and hard over every word whilst composing this piece! Best wishes :)
Comment from Y. M. Roger
oh, now that is poetry in both words and picture -- a beautifully crafted thirteen syllables that should do well at the polls! :) Thank you for sharing! :) :) Yvette
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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oh, now that is poetry in both words and picture -- a beautifully crafted thirteen syllables that should do well at the polls! :) Thank you for sharing! :) :) Yvette
Comment Written 08-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much, Yvette, for your lovely feedback and good luck wishes! I appreciate both :)
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi,
This is a great contest entry, what with the image you've selected, depicting how our words are tied together in a proverbial web.
I don't see a single thing amiss here to suggest for revisions.
Thank you so very much for sharing your work and best of luck in the contest voting booth!
Jan
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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Hi,
This is a great contest entry, what with the image you've selected, depicting how our words are tied together in a proverbial web.
I don't see a single thing amiss here to suggest for revisions.
Thank you so very much for sharing your work and best of luck in the contest voting booth!
Jan
Comment Written 08-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much, Jan, for your lovely feedback and good luck wishes! I appreciate both :)
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You're most welcome - my pleasure! :-) Jan
Comment from Earl Corp
The picture you chose to accompany your poem greatly enhances the presentation of your words. Thirteen syllables is hardly enough to work with.Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2019
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The picture you chose to accompany your poem greatly enhances the presentation of your words. Thirteen syllables is hardly enough to work with.Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2019
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Thank you, Earl, for your good luck wishes. Much appreciated!
You are right - writing a poem with an allowance of just 13 syllables is somewhat of a challenge!
Kind regards :)
Comment from RodG
This short poem accurately describes what writing--for most poets--is all about. Indeed the process is a "Labour of Love" or we would not work with such "precision and care." Rod
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2019
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This short poem accurately describes what writing--for most poets--is all about. Indeed the process is a "Labour of Love" or we would not work with such "precision and care." Rod
Comment Written 08-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2019
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Thank you, Rod, for your feedback. I appreciate it :) Kindest regards...
