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Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "You Will Come I Wait Some"God, Omnipresent is here, there, everywhere!
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Comment from called2rite
I love how the poem flows without a formal expression or grammar. A simplistic way of writing how he feels life has been for him. Keep up the good work. comment made on 2-12-19 called2rite.
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I love how the poem flows without a formal expression or grammar. A simplistic way of writing how he feels life has been for him. Keep up the good work. comment made on 2-12-19 called2rite.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2019
Comment from robyn corum
Al,
This was an interesting acrostic that clearly expresses your love and commitment for our God and Ruler. I'm surprised you didn't enter it into the Acrostic contest. Thanks for sharing!
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Al,
This was an interesting acrostic that clearly expresses your love and commitment for our God and Ruler. I'm surprised you didn't enter it into the Acrostic contest. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 09-Feb-2019
Comment from Janet Foor
A creative acrostic poem expressed in your own style. I enjoyed the long lines and vivid imagery. Your message of faith was clearly stated
Blessings
Janet
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A creative acrostic poem expressed in your own style. I enjoyed the long lines and vivid imagery. Your message of faith was clearly stated
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 09-Feb-2019
Comment from angel123
Your spiritual Acrostic poem is interesting and creatively written. Good use of alliteration of many letters and sounds throughout your poem. And your artwork choice enhances your message. Best wishes!
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Your spiritual Acrostic poem is interesting and creatively written. Good use of alliteration of many letters and sounds throughout your poem. And your artwork choice enhances your message. Best wishes!
Comment Written 09-Feb-2019
Comment from lyenochka
I read the acrostic part and read the same lines of the title which reads like a short poem in itself. I sense a lot of faith, waiting on the Lord and trusting Him and giving thanks for all that you could accomplish here.
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I read the acrostic part and read the same lines of the title which reads like a short poem in itself. I sense a lot of faith, waiting on the Lord and trusting Him and giving thanks for all that you could accomplish here.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2019
Comment from LIJ Red
I see the acrostic feature, but the acrostic line leaves me a bit baffled. Will you shortly stop waiting? No matter, I was always weak on the derivative and mystical.
An excellent faith post,,,
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I see the acrostic feature, but the acrostic line leaves me a bit baffled. Will you shortly stop waiting? No matter, I was always weak on the derivative and mystical.
An excellent faith post,,,
Comment Written 09-Feb-2019
Comment from Douglas Paul
I don't see the acrostic nature of this poem. It sound like you have many accomplishments that you are proud of - good for you, Have a good day
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I don't see the acrostic nature of this poem. It sound like you have many accomplishments that you are proud of - good for you, Have a good day
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Comment Written 09-Feb-2019
Comment from Joan E.
I always enjoy your style and admired your use of the acrostic form free of punctuation. I did not realize you have been writing for forty years. Thank you for sharing your achievements and goals. Cheers- Joan
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I always enjoy your style and admired your use of the acrostic form free of punctuation. I did not realize you have been writing for forty years. Thank you for sharing your achievements and goals. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 09-Feb-2019
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
A well-written acrostic poem with a deeply emotional and spiritual connection to life on earth and our "permanent Home Land," (a word choice that I really liked). Beautiful descriptions throughout.
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A well-written acrostic poem with a deeply emotional and spiritual connection to life on earth and our "permanent Home Land," (a word choice that I really liked). Beautiful descriptions throughout.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2019
Comment from apky
Congratulations for all your achievements and be blessed! This is a unique acrostic which I for one am not familiar with. But your poems have all been rather mysterious and spiritual to me.
Your Flower Land sounds like heaven on earth.
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Congratulations for all your achievements and be blessed! This is a unique acrostic which I for one am not familiar with. But your poems have all been rather mysterious and spiritual to me.
Your Flower Land sounds like heaven on earth.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2019
